Well I posted my first story here, I originally wrote it for a E-zine called divine dirt quarterly (http://www.divinedirtquarterly.com/). I enjoyed some of the smaller stories there, it just seemed that the authors were able to create a world that let my imagination take where ever I wanted to go. I think in the 500 words or so they did a great job and I wanted to see what I could do in that amount of space.
I submitted a story called 'Teeth' in which I was trying to create a little story about anything, after reviewing it over and 2 revisions then editing myself then having my spouse edit it, I finally felt prepared to have it poked and prodded by the folks on the internet.
One glaring mistake, I used 'light year' as a measure of time (duh), I hope it didn't ruin the story (there wasn't much of one to begin with.)
I guess that will show me for my overconfidence I think more due diligence next time and just some overall practice would be helpful in the future.
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