Some Basic Info About My Demon Story

By Kirvee · Jun 15, 2009 · ·
  1. Felt like writing out some basic things.

    The main characters are Sam Baxter and Lorain Claire (both of their names came to me as they are when the story idea hit me).

    The world they are both transported to, for now, has no name. However, it's similar to Earth but society there is similar to the medieval ages (although not quite the same).

    In this world there are three distinct races: Humans, Elves, and Demons (not Satan's minions, more like humanized animal spirits).

    Humans are a rather weak species unless they have a weapon of some sort and live in villages and towns. Only a few humans can use magic if they have the talent for it.

    Elves are as they usually are, slender-framed, pointy-eared beings with high magic skills. The elves in this story, though, are an endangered race. They're endangered for several reasons: The humans destroying their forest homes in order to make room for themselves, and the Demon King who has captured and killed many elves in an attempt to learn their magical abilities.

    Demons are a race of creatures that have two main forms: a human-like form and an animal form (their "demon" form). They were named demons by the human race who were scared and judgemental of their shapeshifting abilities. Demons are typically physically stronger than the average human male and have more stamina and heightened senses than that of a normal human. Demons also live much longer than ordinary humans. Supremacy amongst the demon race is not decided based upon the animal to which a demon is connected. Instead, supremacy is decided on strength and intelligence. In other words, a lion demon will not always be above a mouse demon, if that mouse demon happens to be stronger or more intelligent than the lion demon. This is also how the Demon King is chosen every 1000 years, through a series of supremacy battles with the prize being the title and position. The strongest demon becomes the Demon King for that period.

    Humans detest the demons for their shapeshifting abilities and being seen as physically inferior to the demons. Most demons hate the humans because of the injust beliefs about them and for the fact that a lot of humans have murdered a number of demons with their weapons out of fear whether it was just or not.

    Despite that, there are some demons whom choose to take a human for a mate and some humans who take demons for their lovers. The products of such unions are the half-demons. Half-demons are a slightly odd sub-species. When they're born they look like any other normal human baby. For most of their early life they look human, until they hit puberty. Once a half-demon hits puberty age that's when the demon half of their blood "wakes up" and they gain a set of demon abilities based on the animal spirit their demon parent was connected to.

    Usually, the changes are a pair of ears/horns (depending on the animal) on the top of the head which replace the human ones (those sink into the head until that part is smooth like the rest of the skin), increased senses, increased physical strength (although because of the human blood their strength is only partially below that of a full demon), increased stamina, and some other misc attributes exclusive to each animal (cat half-demons gain longer fingernails to resemble claws, wolf half-demons might have their eyes slightly altered in shape to resemble a wolf's, etc). Half-demons going through "demon puberty" are usually prone to fainting spells (some might become a little sick in the stomach, but usually it's random fainting) because of their bodies struggling to adjust to their changing make-up. Demon puberty, for most half-demons usually lasts a month with their ears being the first things to change.

    Half-demons are the most discriminated sub-race in their world. The parents of half-breeds, biological or adopted, are usually abused and mistreated by other humans/demons for being associated with a half-breed (or for a married/mated demon and human with no children, it's because of their union in general). Half-demons, because of their social status, are often abandoned by their birth parents who have no choice in order to protect them. For this reason, many half-demons are orphans because of either abandonment or their parents being murdered. Also because of their low social status, if a half-demon is known to live in an area near humans or demons, they are required by law of both humans and demons to expose their ears so that it is known to everyone else who the half-demon is. This often means that a half-demon who tries to buy something might be charged too much or shorted change whether they're aware of it or not, but they are not allowed to make a fuss over it because doing so opens them to being brutally beaten to death.

    For most half-demons, their demon puberty goes smoothly and lasts however long it does with the normal side effects. However, there's one mysterious side effect that happens to some half-demons and no one is sure why. This side effect is the creation of a split between the human and demon halves of the half-demon's mind. This can be an extremely dangerous side effect as the demon half is nothing more than a wild, rage-filled animal with a will of its own seperate from the human half. Because of this wild nature, the demon half will frequently attack the human half causing a lot of pain to the half-demon. In some extreme cases or with enough provoction the demon half will take temporary control of the half-demon's body and cause a bout of amnesia for the time it was temporarily in control.

    The only way to counter the side effect is for the effected half-demon to take measures to try and control the demon half so that the human half is always the dominate one. In some cases the half-demon may be able to merge the two halves back together, but this is hard to do. Controlling the demon half is a very exhausting ordeal, but if the demon half is not taken back under control by the human half the half-demon risks going crazy and reduced to nothing more than a wild and raging animal. Half-demons that have succumbed to their demon half can't be recovered 98% of the time and thus have no other choice but to be killed.

    In the other world, there is a group of half-demons who have banded together to rebel against the unfair treatment they, as half-demons receive and strive to dethrone the current Demon King since they feel he's the main cause of the prejudice. The group is fairly small in size, about ten or so half-demons, and as a whole they are loosely organized. However, they function well together due to their common goal and their bonds grown from years of working together.


    That's all I have worked out for basic info. More will be added later.

Comments

  1. tesseraction
    I really like the animal spirit part, I've never seen that for a story like this, it's unique.

    But if someone just chooses to cover their ears, though, how would it be known they're breaking that law?

    I like this whole setup, I hope you keep continuing on with it as you have been.
  2. Kirvee
    Hehe, thanks!

    If a half-demon ignores the law and covers their ears instead, it's still hard to hide that you're not completely human. For one thing, normal animals like dogs and cats will still respond to the half-demon by presence alone, and then the half-demon would be super paranoid about their head getting uncovered which would send off suspicious signals to any nearby humans. There may also be times where, if a half-demon is suspected of trying to hide their identity, then someone like a law official may demand they uncover their head or may remove whatever's covering the half-demon's head themselves (since half-demons are oppressed and basically have no rights).

    W00t! Glad you like it :).
  3. tesseraction
    Some older cultures would change things to make their children more appealing. Footbinding for Japan, genitalia removal for boys in China, etc. Has anyone ever tried anything like that here?
  4. tesseraction
    What kind of things does the rebel group do to hide themselves, efforts for their goals, etc?
  5. Kirvee
    No, because when half-demons are born they look like normal humans. The demon half of their blood doesn't show itself until the child hits puberty.

    And usually by the time they hit puberty they have already been abandoned, so no one is around to do anything like that.

    And if by some strange circumstance a half-demon child hasn't been abandoned or killed by the time they hit puberty, there's really nothing that can be done by either parent to lessen the amount of change their bodies go through to accommodate the demon blood.
  6. tesseraction
    But people can change themselves, have, and always will, at no matter what age. Making the mistake of trying to reshape their own ears, I can see someone trying that in true desperation.

    So other things follow along, in my mind.
  7. tesseraction
    Has any child ever been brought specifically to the rebel group in an act less of abandonment, but more giving away?
  8. Kirvee
    They could, but it'd be difficult to do. The ears are what first change when demon puberty starts, but that particular change is not a gradual process. The ears change instantly, sometimes overnight. The rest of demon puberty can either go along really fast or be a gradual process, it varies from half-demon to half-demon.
  9. Kirvee
    They could, but it'd be difficult to do. The ears are what first change when demon puberty starts, but that particular change is not a gradual process. The ears change instantly, sometimes overnight. The rest of demon puberty can either go along really fast or be a gradual process, it varies from half-demon to half-demon.

    As for your second comment...I don't think so. Unless the parents knew of the group, most half-demons are just dumped on the streets basically. Or they are orphaned due to their parents being killed by prejudice people or demons.
  10. tesseraction
    It might be difficult but people really will go for body mutilation if completely desperate. Ask me the Golden City story in chat cuz I'll totally forget in two minutes to say it ahaha.

    How does one become a member of the group?
  11. Kirvee
    Hm, I agree and can see some doing that. They wouldn't be very successful, since like I said it's very hard to stop the body's changes once they start, but that doesn't mean some of them won't try.

    One becomes a member in one of two ways: Either you're a half-demon picked up by the group at some point from the street, or you are a half-demon who passes a test to make sure you aren't a spy or anything.
  12. tesseraction
    I'm not sure how taking a knife and trying to cut off a point once they're grown would be hard to do? Other than mentally.

    What's the test like?:D

    Has any street urchins tried to pretend they were half-demon so they could live in a slightly better situation?
  13. Kirvee
    If it's your EAR, yes, that'd be hard to do because that's like intentionally making yourself deaf which is not a smart move if you live on the streets. It could perhaps be done to something like a horn or such, but other appendages like tails or wings could never be removed because not only would it be hard but in a way the half-demon would be removing defense mechanisms.

    The test basically consists of one half-demon (usually the group leader) asking various questions and the bat half-demon (or another half-demon able to sense lies) usually listens in either knowingly or unknowingly to the one trying to get in the group. Afterwards the one who listened in will tell the half-demon asking questions the ratio/probability of lies in each answer and that determines if the half-demon gets in. There may also sometimes be a physical test depending on the animal the half-demon's demon half comes from (since some are suitable for fighting, others are not).
  14. tesseraction
    In a situation like theirs, if a human urchin and a half-demon urchin had bonded and the human took care of, what would happen to the human in the rebel case?
  15. Kirvee
    *just realized she left out your third question from before*

    To answer that one, human street urchins wouldn't try to pretend to be half-demons because not only is that hard to pretend, but it'd only make their situation worse. As human street urchins, they could possibly be adopted. half-demon street urchins will never be adopted or saved.

    To answer your current question,

    Hmmm....well, most of the half-demons in the rebel group are distrustful of humans because of the oppression they face. If the half-demon gets into the group, the human may not due to that distrust unless the human were to prove themselves. That's actually somewhat relative to a similar event in the story.
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