Geekin' out on poetry (and Romanticism)—my study thread

By Xoic · Jul 1, 2023 · ·
Wherein Xoic attempts to edumacate himself in things poetical (and Romantical)
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  1. I was making a post for the Let's talk about poetry thread, but it started getting really finnicky and nit-picky, and I don't think it's general interest stuff that most board readers would appreciate, so I'm moving it here. I can get all obsessive and dive as deep as I want on my blog, and there's nobody to drive away. I'll still be hosting that thread, but I want this option for my really deep posts that would probably annoy people out on the main board.

    Ok, I'll start by putting this here for context. Taken from the Let's talk about poetry thread:

    Ann: a pest
    A foot with three syllables, stress on the third, I asked what it's called if you look back
    I joked it's tricorder, but now I reorder my thoughts (as I page through my book, Jack!)
    Seems it's called Anapest,* deem it one of the best metric plans one can be representin'
    And now I need more just to finish this whore so I'm rhymin' and rappin' and ventin'

    And I now realize, since I've opened my eyes, that it takes more than one foot to move on
    No need to be strict, you can conter-addict—what I thought was a 'rule' I improve on
    Mix 'em up just a bit, cough hack swallow and spit, don't be rigid with laying your feet down
    Anapest and Iambic, you can swap out and cross-pick, use a mix-em-up rhythm and beat, clown

    * Not to be confused with Bud: a pest
    And now, with that in place (so the rest of this makes sense hopefully):

    I've learned now that the opposite of an Anapest is called a Dactyl—three syllables to a foot, accent on the first. Not a very helpful name though. Couldn't it be an anti-pest, or something? Antipasto maybe? A little consistency in naming would be nice.

    Actually I'm not sure if I'm going to try to memorize the names of all these—what would they be called? types of feet? Meters? Far more important to understand them functionally, and the fact that you don't need to stick strictly with one of them all the way through. In fact, I decided to look at this:

    Not sure if Jack should be stressed or not. I could say it either way and both sound natural. But it looks like each line begins and ends with an Iamb (2 syllables) and switches to Anapests (three syllables) in between. Then I dropped another Iamb in the 1st line ("I asked"). First line has 10 syllables total, second has 11 (because the first line used an Iamb where the second used an Anapest).

    It occurs to me, to make the rythym work, you must insert a pause where the comma is in the first line, right in front of the second Iamb—

    "A foot with three syllables, stress on the third, (pause) I asked what it's called if you look back"​

    The pause fills the space taken up in the other line by the first syllable of the anapest there—

    "I joked it's tricorder, but now I re-or-der my thoughts (as I page through my book, Jack!)"​

    The little syllable Der fills the space that the comma creates in the first line. I'm getting really specific here, but this helps me understand exactly what's happening. I could drop in a one-syllable word like And where the pause is and it becomes an anapest, the meter still isn't broken (there anyway).

    Just so everybody can keep up, here's the key
    Iamb—two syllables, stress on the second. Was used extensively by Shakespeare among many others: "I am, I was, were you?"
    Anapest—three syllables, stress on the third: "Was that you, Jack-ie Blue, is this me? Can you see?"
    Dactyl—Three syllables, stress on the first (an Anapest turned 'round backwards): "You did that. Where are we? Did it rain?"
    There are different ways to stress these feet (in the last example). You could say "You did that!" "Where are we? and "Did it rain?" But if they're stressed that way, not only do they take on a somewhat different meaning, but they're no longer dactyls. I suppose there's an in-betweener, a foot of three syllables with emphasis on the middle syllable. And it probably also has a name completely un-like either Anapest or Dactyl.

    Yes, it's called an Amphibrach. Of course it is!! Geez ancient Latin-dudes, way to make this stuff hard to remember!

    Hey, this helps keep things organized a bit—an iamb (as in iambic pentameter) is called a di-syllable because it has two syllables. Then you have tri-syllables, which consist of three syllables. That's what anapests, (ptera)dactyls, and brachiosauruses are.

    After a while I'll look into more, one at a time. This is all I can remember for now.


    I provide this kind of stuff in case anybody wants to study along with me. Ok, enough for the first post here. This is gonna get intense. The two books I ordered @evild4ve 's urging have arrived, and I'm reading through the one I've already got. I'll post the deep study geek-out stuff in here, and some of the general interest stuff on the thread.


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  1. Xoic
    "Affirming our humanity is one of the gifts of poetry, and in Sedakova's terms that means a refusal of the world's many pressures toward mediocrity." —Quote from the book In Praise of Poetry
  2. Xoic
    Looking up some info on Rainer Maria Rilke:
    In part it recounts sections of the story told in a book I bought some time ago called Letters to a Young Poet, but it also includes a lot of info on his meeting with the sculptor August Rodin and writing a monograph about him. I really like the idea of "inseeing" Rilke learned from Rodin—a way of understanding someone (or an animal, or even an object) by imagining what it percieves, rather than giving a description of its physical characteristics or its actions. Really putting yourself imaginatively into the subject—becoming it in a sense.
  3. Xoic

    I found this video, and I've watched ten minutes or so of it (from where I started it). Olga struggles a lot to find words, but the man is fascinating. This seems to be on a level with the long video I posted back on page 5, where I first started talking about Lyric poetry.
  4. Xoic

    Here's another lengthy video featuring the same guy—one Rowan Williams, who has been the Archbishop of Canterbury (!) as well as a renouned scholar and poet.
  5. Xoic
    I like what he said about not wanting to be called a Religious Poet, because that sounds like a subgenre or subcategory. Instead—what did he call himself? A poet who writes on religious subject matter (or something close, trying to remember what I saw last night). It has to do with one of his big concepts—slowing down the metabolism of readers (as well as writers). That means rather than accepting cliches or convenient phrases, we find just the right ones, however long that may take. A quick easy label that's almost right will tip you off track, and if you keep doing that you slide off farther and farther.

    He also said he never writes theology or any other religious material in poetic form. Instead he writes poetry that's about those things, which is a very different matter. A small but vital difference. He's very in touch with the idea of poetry (poiesis) as a fresh creation, a startling and original idea, or at least a startling and original expression of one. And of course, what applies to poetry can also apply to literature if it's poetic enough.
  6. Xoic
    I think I'mma start a new thread—Poetry 2.0 or something, for a number of reasons. To post in this one I need to go back to page 2 of my blog and scroll all the way to the bottom, plus I feel like I'm on round 2 now. I got a decent start in the first thread toward understanding the basics (though far from comprehensive), in general poetry, Lyric poetry, and then Romanticism. Now I'm rotating back to general poetry, but hitting a deeper level, more on the intermediate stage. I'm sure I'll still be hitting a lot of the beginner level stuff (still need a lot of it), but I'm ready to launch on the next level for some aspects of it.

    I considered transferring all my recent posts to the new thread, but I don't think I will. I'll just leave them here and link to the new thread.
  7. Xoic
    I've just about finished watching the last video above. The other guy says poetry is about indwelling, and that, contrary to what many students want, a good poem can't be nailed down—

    it's an invitation to dwell in possibility.​
  8. Xoic
    I've been reading over earlier parts of this thread, brushing up on things that have faded a bit (or a lot) in my memory since I started it (about a year ago). Three quarters of the way down page 5 I re-discovered this link:
    This is really great stuff! It goes into detail about what it means that lyric poetry moves from the particular to the universal, or from the personal to the archetypal (or vise versa). And to get a real taste of how it's done by a great poet, I dug out Leaves of Grass and am reading through Song of Myself, one of the poems mentioned in the article. It's a long one, I'm taking it in chunks.

    This is exactly the kind of more intermediate stuff I want to be concentrating on now.
  9. Xoic
    Bruce Springsteen on Bob Dylan, from Springsteen's autobiography:

    "Bob Dylan is the father of my country. Highway 61 Revisited and Bringing It All Back Home were not only great records, but they were the first time I can remember being exposed to a truthful vision of the place I lived. The darkness and light were all there, the veil of illusion and deception ripped aside. He put his boot on the stultifying politeness and daily routine that covered corruption and decay. The world he described was all on view, in my little town, and spread out over the television that beamed into our isolated homes, but it went uncommented on and silently tolerated. He inspired me and gave me hope. He asked the questions everyone else was too frightened to ask, especially to a fifteen-year-old: “How does it feel… to be on your own?” A seismic gap had opened up between generations and you suddenly felt orphaned, abandoned amid the flow of history, your compass spinning, internally homeless. Bob pointed true north and served as a beacon to assist you in making your way through the new wilderness America had become. He planted a flag, wrote the songs, sang the words that were essential to the times, to the emotional and spiritual survival of so many young Americans at that moment.

    "I had the opportunity to sing “The Times They Are A-Changin’ ” for Bob when he received the Kennedy Center Honors. We were alone together for a brief moment walking down a back stairwell when he thanked me for being there and said, “If there’s anything I can ever do for you…” I thought, “Are you kidding me?” and answered, “It’s already been done.” "​

    Both are considered important poets as well as songwriters.
  10. Xoic
    I suppose what I'm doing with these recent posts is bringing poetry down to earth, from the lofty literary heights and the academic ivory towers to the streets. Also this music is a lot more familiar to me than most poetry.

    I'm also starting a move into free verse/prose poetry. Morrison's poetry has a great cadence and rhythym to it, better than what I've run across elsewhere.

    I have a few books on the French symbolists—Baudelaire, Rimbaud and Verlaine. They were the rock stars of their day, just as Lord Byron and Percy Bysshe Shelley were of theirs. I also have a book linking Morrison specifically with Rimbaud. These books were 90's acquisitions, when I was making a big move into studying some intellectual-type subjects.
  11. Xoic
    I went a-searching and could only find a small book by Baudelaire, one brief poem called "Invitation to the Voyage." It's a thing of beauty, with gorgeous sepia photographs and only a few lines of poetry on each page, surrounded by lots of space. And the poetry is very nice. But I no longer seem to have the rest of the books I remember by the French symbolists. I think I'll re-acquire Rimbaud's Illuminations, said to be the launching-point of the prose poem and some of the best examples of it. Prose poetry uses strong imagery and a lot of rhetorical/literary/poetic devices. For many of the writers (of both free verse and prose poetry I think) the King James Bible is a major source.

    My ultimate aim is to write a lyric novella.
  12. Xoic
    I've ordered paperbacks of The Flowers of Evil (Le Fleurs du Mal) by Baudelaire, and a book containing A Season in Hell, The Drunken Boat, and Illuminations by Rimbaud. Whenever I've bought Kindle books of poetry I always regret it, because there's no way to mark pages so you can open right to a favorite. Kindle is good for simply reading something, but not for poetry or research books, where you need to be able to quickly flip through and find what you want.

    Unfortunately I got the Jim Morrison book in Kindle version. And once past the beginning there's been a lot of stuff I don't like, with mostly one or two words per line, occasionally three. Much of what's included seem to be poetic doodles or early sketches of ideas, sometimes just single words or a line that he wanted to remember for a possible future poem. And there are photographs of journal pages that, in the Kindle, are tiny and impossible to read. If I open it on the computer I'll be able to read those. So far I'm not very pleased with the book, though I expect some parts to be much better. I only wish I could flip through it to quickly find those parts, rather than needing to read through it all page by page, which is the curse of the Kindle.
  13. Xoic
    All this new activity is me preparing to launch into my new area of study—free verse and the prose poem. Once I really get going I'll start a new Poetry blog entry. No way will I keep scrolling back a couple of pages every time I want to make a post.
  14. Xoic
    At Thundair's urging (and endorsed by Socks Fox) I dug out Mary Oliver's Poetry Handbook and am reading through it. It covers much of the very familiar territory, but also some really excellent stuff I haven't seen mentioned in other books. And I decided I wanted a nice book covering lots of poets, so I ordered one called 150 Most Famous Poems.
  15. Xoic
    The beginning of this article confirms what I thought I remembered—that the book connecting Morrison and Rimbaud was pretty pedestrian, especially in its exploration of Morrison. But yeah, maybe it got me interested in Rimbaud, and the rest of the French Symbolists.

    And damn! The article is intense, and excellent. And long! I'm not quite halfway through it. Powerful stuff!
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