Jealousy

By HollieHicks · Jul 19, 2011 · ·
  1. I'm jealous of your smile,
    your laugh.
    I'm jealous that you are skinny,
    and I'm fat.
    I'm jealous that your family has money,
    but mine doesn't.
    I'm jealous because you get everything,
    and I get nothing.
    I'm jealous because you don't have to work,
    and I have to.
    I'm jealous because you look like a supermodel,
    and I look like a crayon.
    I'm jealous because your family loves you,
    but mine doesn't.
    I'm jealous cause you have pretty eyes,
    but mine are dull.
    Im jealous cause you have perfect hair,
    but mines boring.
    I'm jealous cause you have a perfect life,
    but I have nothing to live for.
    I'm jealous, I'm jealous, I'm jealous,
    but most of all I'm jealous cause
    your happy!!

Comments

  1. mugen shiyo
    hmmmm....not really poetry I would say. I would take out the I'm after the first and maybe leave the last. And I don't think the color change of happy works. Seems more a distraction. Try this

    I'm jealous of your smile,
    your laugh.
    I'm jealous that you are skinny,
    and I'm fat.
    I'm jealous that your family has money,
    but mine doesn't.
    Because you get everything,
    and I get nothing.
    You don't have to work,
    You look like a supermodel,
    Your family loves you,
    but mine doesn't.
    I'm jealous cause you have pretty eyes,
    I'm jealous cause you have perfect hair
    You have a perfect life,
    but I have nothing to live for.
    I'm jealous, I'm jealous, I'm jealous,
    But most of all I'm jealous
    cause your happy!!

    Sacrilege changing your work, I know, but my way of suggesting. Not bad, though.
  2. LaGs
    From your picture, I can testify that you most certainly do not look like a crayon
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