Tears Of Africa

By Raven · Sep 6, 2007 · 820 · 4
  1. I started work on my new project.

    A short story called tears Of Africa.
    The story is set in Africa and focuses on the continuous fighting.

    Its very different from my usual style I have already posted up the first three segments in the novel section of the forum.

    Though the story is extremely graphic, I'm focusing on the realistic elements of the situation.

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  1. Daniel
    Realistic > downplayed scenarios. :p
    Daniel, Sep 6, 2007
  2. Raven
    It basically delves into the cruelty of the African Militia in Sierra Leona.
    Raven, Sep 7, 2007
  3. Raven
    Today with the spare time on my hands I have decided to write some more for this story. So far its coming along nicely and i'm pretty happy with the grammer too.
    Raven, Sep 7, 2007
  4. Raven
    After recieving some really good constructive Crit on the Tears Of Africa Story I'm happy to know I've taken the story into the right direction. So all looks well
    Raven, Sep 7, 2007
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