This is a little part of my son story.

By Jay Scarlett · Oct 14, 2018 · 1K · 5
  1. Once a upon a time, there was a little princess and her name was Maya.
    A dragon named Jo went to the princess castle, and a brave knight named Matias came to the castle with a ginormous cake. The brave knight got happy his friend the dragon came to her surprised party and all of the knights friends had fun and live happily ever after.

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  1. John-Wayne
    Beautiful Story, :) . He is well on his way to becoming a future Author.

    I always cry with happy endings. :p
    John-Wayne, Oct 14, 2018
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  2. Jay Scarlett
    It is a beautiful story, I'll make sure to post more of his short stories. He will be super happy to know you like it. :)
    Jay Scarlett, Oct 15, 2018
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  3. 8Bit Bob
    Short but sweet :)
    8Bit Bob, Oct 15, 2018
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  4. Shnette
    A writer in the making. Yeh.
    Please give him lots of encouragement.
    Shnette, Oct 17, 2018
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  5. John-Wayne
    Now the next step, is have your son do a little self critiquing. See what you can do to to improve it.

    Is the cake strawberry and of course we need ice cream!

    The dragon bring a gift to the party?

    What's the princesses name? What's the dragons name? LOL
    John-Wayne, Oct 17, 2018
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