Great Story/No plot.

By ramedrake · Jun 16, 2011 · ·
  1. After a kebab and a beer the other day my colleague started telling me an idea he'd had about a man with an animals head living in Tokyo and dealing with racism and police brutality. I loved the idea hurried home and wrote six pages of scene setting: The characters painful homesickness, his depression, and confusion in the Japanese society.
    However, once this was done I was rather stuck with where to take it from there.
    I named the animal after my colleague (he's not so impressed by that) and while I can envisage many situations, that he finds himself in I can't really come up with a whole plot. The obvious choice is Yakuza and intrigue with corrupt coppers but I've never been a competent crime writer and would like something a bit fresher. I don't really write action well in comic form either so perhaps its better to be like American Splendor and make the mundane interesting rather than aiming high drama.
    There's another kebab and beer to be had tonight, perhaps fresh inspiration will come.

Comments

  1. Kontrast
    he tries to find romance by going on blind dates :D
  2. teacherayala
    What if he is a performer of Kabuki? Then maybe the animal head would come in handy? He could be well-revered for his acting talent, but considered eccentric and odd in the world outside. Supposedly in Kabuki, masks were used for "transformation" plots, so perhaps the plot of his Kabuki could be channeling his animal spirit and "transforming" into the animal except that in reality he really does have an animal's head and it's really not a transformation after all.

    (Am I making any sense at all?)
  3. teacherayala
    Oh, yes, and maybe the mystery part could be a murder in a Kabuki piece. And since he's the animal, they all assume he did it.
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