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Published by mugen shiyo in the blog mugen shiyo's blog. Views: 77

So many poems
but the same old style,
and reviews with the smiles
of crocodiles;
where average is lauded
in hopes that they audit
and return, in kind, your praise.

A few gems, there are
from the rawest of poets;
the new ones who don't have
their vision contorted.
And amongst the old
there are the bold
and the gifted, I respect much.

But for all that I see-
a spamming spree-
of boring rhymes of complexity;
attempting to be
more than they should be-
a bore
lacking imagination.
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