monotany...

By mugen shiyo · Apr 27, 2011 · ·
  1. So many poems
    but the same old style,
    and reviews with the smiles
    of crocodiles;
    where average is lauded
    in hopes that they audit
    and return, in kind, your praise.

    A few gems, there are
    from the rawest of poets;
    the new ones who don't have
    their vision contorted.
    And amongst the old
    there are the bold
    and the gifted, I respect much.

    But for all that I see-
    a spamming spree-
    of boring rhymes of complexity;
    attempting to be
    more than they should be-
    a bore
    lacking imagination.

Comments

  1. LaGs
    I like this poem. You might think I say this as i smile like a crocodile, but i have no intention of soliciting praise back from you as i dont write poems. But good job! :)
  2. mugen shiyo
    lol. nice :)

    i'm in my bored and don't give a crap, hot and hating it mood so i'm irritable. but thanks for the review and the laugh
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