I decided to look deeper into POV. Was thinking about looking for a good book that covers it, but decided first to see what I can find on the net. After seeing a succession of typical shallow web articles telling me nothing I don't already know, I ran across what seems to be a really decent site called NovelWritingHelp.com.
They have a bunch of articles relating to POV. On one called Third Person Narrative Made Easy I ran across confirmation of something I had said in an earlier post, about switching between a 'cinematic' external viewpoint and going inside the character's head. At the time I was speaking entirely from intuition, or maybe I've seen it enough in books that I understood but couldn't remember any examples, so it was mostly a strong suspicion. Here's what the article says on the subject:
- At the start of the scene, the camera is positioned some distance away from where the action is about to take place. In filmmaking, this is called the establishing shot.
- Next, you cut to a much closer view of the scene as it’s about to unfold – one which includes the viewpoint character in the frame. We’re still seeing the character from the outside at this point.
- Finally (and this is where the movie analogy breaks down), the camera enters the viewpoint character’s head and their eyes become the lens. More than that, the camera not only sees what the viewpoint character sees; it smells what they smell, tastes what they taste and hears their thoughts.
It also says that it's typical to use the external POV mostly just for establishing shots—the beginning of a new scene. I think I kept switching back and forth in my excerpt from the Beastseekers (well, on those rare occasions when I wasn't completely in external). I also want to look through some 3rd person novels by actual real writers now and see how they handle it.
Also, it was gratifying to see they use a lot of filmmaking metaphors. It seems to be my preferred way to think about it.
- This entry is part 1 of 10 in the series My explorations into POV.
Series TOC
- Series: My explorations into POV
- Part 1: Switching between close and distant 3rd
- Part 2: I'm realizing how important it is to really understand POV
- Part 3: POV Chart
- Part 4: What's like omniscient, only different?
- Part 5: On transitioning between POVs
- Part 6: Inner Monologue—direct and indirect
- Part 7: Showing and Telling in Inner Monologue
- Part 8: Freely discoursing—indirectly
- Part 9: Going deeper into Deep POV
- Part 10: Getting Emotional
- This entry is part 1 of 10 in the series My explorations into POV.
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