The Order: Star and Moon

By GuardianWynn · Jan 1, 2016 · ·
  1. This is a poem. Posting it here just to share. I hope you enjoy it if you like stuff like this. :)

    The Order: Star and Moon


    Alone in my room I remember today,
    how instantly my mind began to stray.
    This feeling deep inside my heart,
    reminds me of the beauty lost in art.
    Do I bask in the light he presents?
    Is it worth the rain, the long laments?


    Before long I found him once more,
    bound by his gravity I was done for.
    His hand warm like a fire,
    passionately it fuels my desire.
    Even blinded by your touch,
    it is a hand of ice in my clutch.


    At last I have figured it out.
    No longer do I doubt.
    Begone is the notion of facade,
    now only a man I must applaud.
    Born in ice yet burn so bright,
    not to be stopped by a plight


    You are a moon but burn like a star,
    a sight so majestic and bizarre.
    I wish in me I could harness,
    your power to shine with darkness.
    Without regret and always true,
    my final words: I love you.

Comments

  1. GuardianWynn
    Oh dear. I never noticed that I made such an error. I am sorry about that!
  2. GuardianWynn
    And and actually he is the moon. She is a star. I think or thst was the idea. Thst even though she had more potential than him he outshined her. Seemingly unaware that his class is lower and thst impressed her. Does that make sense?
  3. GuardianWynn
    I still saw his as the moon. The point was or the point inwas trying for was thst he exceeded his potential. So him being a moon but having star like gravity was an example of that. Does that make sense?

    Funnt enough. I have a picture of them as a couple. I have a lot of art. Lol
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