1. GH0ST

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    What is better?

    Discussion in 'Character Development' started by GH0ST, Aug 18, 2017.

    Is it better for my character to be a man who abandons his life as a warrior, or to be a a man who finds fighting in a right cause a way to redeem himself?
     
  2. Laurus

    Laurus Disappointed Idealist Contributor

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    Either can make a good story. You gotta decide what feels more right to write to you. Except don't go writing sentences like I just did, that's no good.
     
  3. GH0ST

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    If I could decide myself, I wouldn't ask about it.

    Well, I personally think that the first option is a bit bland. Because it doesn't have an affect on future actions of Main Character. The second option doesn't have problem with that. However, the first option seems a bit more original.

    What do you think?
     
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    Whichever one fits where the story will end up.

    Neither is more original than the other. What will make either original is how you handle it & what the MC goes through.
     
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    Fair, but I think you should have given it more thought and fleshed out some plots before asking about it. As it is, there's not really much here to be decided on.

    I find the first option to be less "original," but that's likely to do with the types of media and genres I expose myself to.
     
  6. Nilfiry

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    How about you write out both and see which one you like better?
     
  7. Seren

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    It largely depends on your plot, what your character is going to go through, and what purpose they serve. Is he a main character, or the MC's best friend, or a mentor to the MC, or something else? What impact are you intending for him to have on the story? If he abandons his life as a warrior, he won't be fighting. If he is fighting...well, he is. If he's the MC, that creates two very different plots. So it's impossible for us to choose without further knowledge. :)
     
  8. GH0ST

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    Will have to try that.
     
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    I think it also depends on the character in question - which would be the more difficult path for him? I'd choose that one.
     

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