That Moment...

Forgot to add this: it was a toxic environment, though still not the worst job I've ever had (nor my worst moments on the job). After a while I almost found humor in him blowing up at 2:30 in the afternoon on the regular. It was like working in the middle of a cartoon. The fact that he never blew up at me and seemed to like my work helped a lot, though. I hope things get better for you!

 

TMW... you go back to earlier parts of your WIP, to reminiscence, sort of compare your MC at the start from where she is at the moment (near the end), to read some of the earlier stuff. And find how much you yourself have learned. . Lot's of work to be done... very wordy, or overly wordy. Better words could be use and of course this time. thanks to BigSoftMoose. I finally can see my Tense issue and look forward to fixing them in the next sweep of the WIP in the self-edit.

 

TMW you get some writing done, break 97.5k, and really have a unit kinda become
a bit of a family while on their way to the LZ. Also having them become a new designated
Wolf Pack by General 'Red Wolf' Volkov, after she takes up command of a mixed squad
of Centurian Shadow Company, a couple of Uldivariions, and a Martian Colonial Marine
named Rupert.
Suppose they would have a close in discussion as they head off on a clandestine mission
with the odds stacked against them, as they head out to join Corlixia, Sarge, and Unicrix
in one of half a dozen blacksites of the Confederation.

 

Oh yeah, baby. One of those groups has got to be covert ops so they meet up on opposite sides (even though not)!

 

Just felt the need to highlight my favourite parts of this post.

 

Awesome effort, fantastic! Well done!

 

Damn, you're clever. That's one hell of a good idea.

 

So instead of a clueless reporter telling you they have no idea who's winning, now a computer does it instead? Sounds like situation normal to me.

 

TMW a really wicked dream inspires a short story. Feels good man.

 

That moment when you really need to pee but there's a chance you might miss your team actually scoring a goal.

 

When did ring toss become a professional sport?

 

I don't care how many fancy lawyers you met or how shiny that new car of yours is, you just keep your damn hands off your sister!

 

They didn't. The other team scored again, though.

Oh well. At least England beat Switzerland. I know that one was just a friendly... but there's no bigger humiliation in international football so

 

Yeah, fuck them.

 

I see your banjo, and raise you a sitar!

 

TMW you see a serving board, and your first thought isn't food related!

Spoiler

I blame a certain someone...

 

TMW you walk into a heated fandom conversation, say "this is all kinda' silly, isn't it?", forgetting that those words are the arming code for full-on nuclear exchange.

 

I raise you a capella (takes about a minute for the song to start)

 

when u walk into a real life game . . .
it makes her so sad ...