Era of Darkness Discussion Thread

im just an amatuer but it seems okay to me, not masterful but still good.

how about me though?

 

yes honestly.

 

Honest?

Spoiler

You're a good roleplayer. I like how you play your character, maybe it's the exaggeration of the bi-polarity, but even so, it's a good roleplaying. You're fine on the SPaG department, but if I had to make a recommendation, it's that don't use so much the 'enter' key; it makes reading your posts a bit more difficult for me, but that's personally a pet peeve of mine, as I have a shifty eye.

Also:

That comma in there has no place, the dialogue tag should follow the punctuation inside the quotes. Just pointing that out.

EDIT: Deathblade, to see what I think, press the spoiler button in the post just after yours. Don't worry it's nothing bad .

But I'm no one to give out reviews.:redface:

 

Eeeeeeeeeffffffffffffffffffffff

I started playing Civilization IV and, before I knew it, it was 9:00PM. I gotta catch up...

 

good, but I already figured out from darkthought I use too much character. Leaka also told me its not good to use one line sentences, so I differ actions from dialogue on enters.

 

Did you read the one for Honorius? The one I wrote for you is just the one below your original question. The one for Honorius is just the one below your "yes honestly" post. The one for you is just above that one.

 

That game is very much like that lol.

 

i never was good at grammer. also, and forgive my ignorance, but what is SPAG?

I'll work on the thing with the enter button. You know, i never tried to make my character Bi-polar. i hadn't even realized that it seemed that way until someone spoke up. of course, ill keep developing Incendia as if i never heard anything about "bi-polar"

 

no it adds a nice touch to the beginning. As the game progresses, make your character more understanding as everyone else will. My character won't be so drawn back in the end.

 

Spelling, punctuation and grammar.

Someone posts in the RPG already, I'm getting anxious. *Bites nails*

 

I would, but my character is currently walking away waiting for you slowpokes.

 

heh heh. Does me knowing what MICE is relieve your anxiety at all?

 

And im sorta waiting for FW... or someone to enter with sword bigger then deathblades.

 

this sword ain't big enough for the both of us. (lol)

 

did i miss something? what would you do deathblade, and what are you waiting to do rippa mate?

 

Lol, you made me pull out the ol' "Characters & Viewpoint" to remind me of that one.

 

Well, damn. Looks like I missed the action.

 

i has that book

Also. abculatter, scarlet is definitely a shade of red... not blue.

 

Yeah? Well, YOUR MOM!

 

Well, I'm out for the days you guys.

 

im sorta waiting for FW but i dont think she's gunna reply. gunna post some story and if ntohings happened when i get back then i might blow something up or whatever.

 

yeah, I think fantasy won't be on till later, and I'm gonna be in bed in the next 15 minutes.

 

depending on what happens i might squeeze in a post tomorrow morning. but i have band practice tomorrow so i wont be back on till round 5:30 eastern time.

 

AWW I missed everything yet nothing

 

i have awesumness lined up, and in my sleep im afraid its probably going to be ruined...