1. GoodSeed

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    2 Main Characters

    Discussion in 'Character Development' started by GoodSeed, Feb 8, 2022.

    Hello Fellow Writers - I'd really appreciate your weird and wonderful and well-thought out thoughts as always. Having a real dilemma with 2 main characters. I cannot seem to tie their arcs together. Here is a bit more detail.

    MC1 - male. lawyer wants to win a trial against a specific antangonist who has been cruel to animals.
    MC2 - male. social activist /doctor who wants to put a halt to the cruelty to animals in general.

    Both MCs live in the same small town/city. I cannot drop MC2 incase you are thinking that, but making him a supporting act, now that I would welcome if anyone can expand on it. Thanks a bunch.
     
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    Maybe Mc2 is a vet - and knew one of the animals in question. Maybe he feels guilty for having not spotted the defendant as being an animal abuser.
     
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    Have MC2 be a star trial witness for MC1. Have them fall in together while the case is being built. There are lots of options.
     
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    Thank you first of all. Would you care to expand on "lots of options" kindly. Thank you.
     
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    The way you've described the situation I'm having trouble seeing how these two could not know about each other. MC1 looking on google for an expert witness who will deliver a specific type of testimony, the first X candidates don't want to make the necessary commitments, MC2 actually does?
     
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    If MC2 is a star witness in a trial led by MC1. , his testimony will centre on the patients he saw as a doctor. Should I describe those scenes *earlier* in the novel or *wait* until his testimony at the trial ?

    Maybe someone can reply. Thanks
     
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    Pit them agaisnt eachother. Having each think the other doesn't like animals.
     

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