It's been awhile since I've worked on my novel. I went back yesterday and read the last chapter I did and some parts sounded written. Not as organic as I had thought at the moment. I tried to put it out of my mind but if it reads that way with me, chances are it will with someone else as well. Im going to try and correct this pattern for the rest of my book and re write what I may need to when the story is put down. Have you noticed this sort of thing with anything you have written? Its a book but It can't feel like someone putting words down for the sake of it. Perhaps the break I took was for the better. I could provide an excerpt for an example if someone would like to see what I mean.
