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    Selluwud Senior Member

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    Cover Page Feedback

    Discussion in 'Cover Design' started by Selluwud, Dec 21, 2024.

    I am using this for my new book. Thoughts? Finished Cover.jpg
     
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    The ISBN number on the back cover makes me think your book is already published. If so, I'm wondering why you're seeking feedback. If it's not yet published, I suggest you make your name on the front cover larger so it can be read in the thumbnail your publisher creates for its point of sale. Also, I know that AI stands for Artificial Intelligence, but A.I.M. on the front cover left me a bit confused. Then I went to your back cover and found the explanation that "AI guides humanity toward peace." Prospective buyers won't see the back cover until they purchase your book. You might think about putting that phrase on your front cover as a subtitle, so reader interpret A.I.M as the "aim" of AI. Other than those two suggestions, I think you've got a really appealing front and back cover. I really like the black and gold harmony!
     
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    Selluwud, let me know when your story is published. I've been following Elon Musk's posts about AI and it's a very interesting topic and potentially world changing trend.
     
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    I will, thank you. It's been submitted and has to pass review which should be very soon. The story has a quick mention of an "eccentric billionaire" whose robot and drone factory come into play to give some validity to some of the action that takes place.
     
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    I am not a fan of the transparency. The cut of arteries gives it an incomplete look. I liked the use of symbols to mimic the title, but it didn't paint a picture of the intervention of AI. I feel the cover needs a way to catch the eye and a bit of intriguing pieces that makes one wonder what is that about. If you can get them to the blurb, it has done its job.
     
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    Yes, I wanted the heart to somehow have a mechanical/digital appearance, but everything I came up with looked a little wonky. I settled. Thanks for your take.
     
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    My e-book version has gone live on Amazon Kindle and I am waiting on the paperback and hardcover versions to clear review. I've got to do some research on marketing as I am below novice level and my work was never intended to be anything but a personal project/objective. But now we're here! https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0DRP7FL3V
     

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