It would really help if I could get some feedback for my introduction...

Hey guys! I'm a young writer from Canada that was looking for some professional feedback. It would be really helpful if I got some feedback for this little intro I made to my "Choose Your Own Adventure" book. Thanks!

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Thanks for reading!
I hope to get some feedback.

Sincerely,
L.E. Phant

 

Hi Midulan, welcome to the forums. Sorry I had to delete the text of your story that you posted, but you need to be a member here for two weeks and have twenty posts, including at least two critiques of others' works, before you're allowed to post your own work for critique. If you haven't, make sure you check out New Member Quick Start and Forum Rules.

Don't be afraid to jump into an ongoing discussion or two, and once your requirements have been met, I'm sure the membership will be happy to give their imput on your work.

 

Oh... I did not know. Thanks for letting me know, though. I sure will keep that in mind.

 

No worries.

 

You can think that as making you better writer + better to use critique to develop yourself.

When you give others critique that helps them, you see critique a bit different way. That helps you when you get some.