1. avio

    avio New Member

    Joined:
    Nov 25, 2023
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    2

    personality

    Discussion in 'Descriptive Development' started by avio, Nov 25, 2023.

    how do you describe someone who acts tough only if they are with their friends?
     
  2. Xoic

    Xoic Prognosticator of Arcana Ridiculosum Contributor Blogerator

    Joined:
    Dec 24, 2019
    Messages:
    13,360
    Likes Received:
    14,635
    Location:
    Way, way out there
    That's peer pressure. They don't want to look weak or afraid in front of their friends, so they put on a tough-guy persona. As for how to 'describe' it, I'm not sure describe is the right word. Hopefully you're showing it rather than telling it. And you would do that by showing what the character is like when his tough-guy friends aren't around, and then what he's like when they are. His behavior changes drastically as soon as one of them is in the room, and maybe people say that. They might wait til the friends are gone if they like the character, or if not they might say it while they're still in the room to embarrass him in front of them.
     
    trevorD, avio and Louanne Learning like this.
  3. avio

    avio New Member

    Joined:
    Nov 25, 2023
    Messages:
    4
    Likes Received:
    2
    oh, that's a great idea. tysm
     
    Xoic likes this.
  4. trevorD

    trevorD Senior Member

    Joined:
    Jan 10, 2021
    Messages:
    474
    Likes Received:
    527
    Location:
    Mayor of Lollygaggleville
    Let me know if you need me to kick his butt k..
     
  5. peachalulu

    peachalulu Member Reviewer Contributor

    Joined:
    May 20, 2012
    Messages:
    4,630
    Likes Received:
    3,821
    Location:
    occasionally Oz , mainly Canada
    bravado? Depends on the situation, personality and why he feels the need to stand out that way. I knew a short aggressive guy who was always shooting off his mouth. He had been dumped by his parents on his grandparents which always had him on the offensive so that he never had to deal with defending his situation, as nobody dared bring it up.
     
  6. deadrats

    deadrats Contributor Contributor

    Joined:
    Jul 7, 2016
    Messages:
    6,122
    Likes Received:
    7,504
    I think a characters personality is something you want to show rather than something you want to describe. Their personality should come out via the story. Saying they act tough when their friends are around doesn't really say much in terms of their personality. In fact, it's very common for people to act a certain way in certain company, though, not always the example you've given here.
     
  7. w. bogart

    w. bogart Contributor Contributor Blogerator

    Joined:
    Nov 5, 2022
    Messages:
    2,561
    Likes Received:
    1,733
    Location:
    US
    Deadrats, is right. To show what you say you want for the character, I would suggest you position one friend as a confidant. Then you can show the personality contrast in dialogue.
     
    deadrats likes this.

Share This Page

  1. This site uses cookies to help personalise content, tailor your experience and to keep you logged in if you register.
    By continuing to use this site, you are consenting to our use of cookies.
    Dismiss Notice