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    Grammar "The citizens, they slept soundly" grammar form

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by Iain Aschendale, Apr 24, 2023.

    Not a writing-related question, but what is the name for the doubling of a subject in an English sentence?

    "The citizens, they slept soundly."

    "The man, he looked dashing."

    "The cat, it was sleeping."

    I've run into a youtube video where the presenter seems to think that every. damn. sentence. needs to follow this pattern and I can't for the life of me remember the name. Google, it is snatching onto particulars and not grasping the overall pattern.

    Thanks in advance.
     
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    @Seven Crowns, he will know.
     
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    It's a preposed appositive. It comes before the term it is clarifying instead of after it.

    It, the cat, was sleeping. (which is silly, but is a normal appositive)
    The cat, it was sleeping. (preposed)
     
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    Thanks! I know it can be used for emphasis, but this particular youtuber seemed to think it was just the standard way to make a sentence. The content was otherwise good but I ended up gritting my teeth in horrified anticipation.
     
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    I think I know who you mean. Does he also have a southern accent and sort of sing-song when he talks? I think it's That Umbrella Guy. If so, I've seen a few of his videos, and as soon as he starts in with that stuff I remember "Oh no, it's that guy!" and I switch off.
     
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    Nah, this guy has about eight or so channels, white dude, bald/shaved head, heavy-rimmed glasses and a dark beard. British accent. He used to do the thing where he would cut out every pause in his speaking to create a breathless, rapid-fire effect.
     
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    The zeropunctuation guy?
     
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    There's been a few times when I've written stuff like this. They always seem to get edited out later on. I don't know what the grammar term is for it (does one exist?), but to me, it's a telescoping sentence or a volvulus. Ha, hopefully, I coined a word.
     
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    I try not to expose my volvulus in public.
     
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    Well now, lol. Cough.
     
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    Croshaw has hair, I think, though it is fleeing the brow.
     
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