Could I please get criticism for this summary of Chapter 1 of a webcomic? Also, I want them to both form a group of thieves (still just the two of them main characters at that point), at the end of Chapter 3 of my story. Do you mind if I could also get suggestions for how to lead in to that "Final decision"? Thanks! [attachment deleted by moderator]
If you've made two critiques to other's stories in the workshop, you can post it there and will most likely get feedback in return. People rarely give critique for free if it's more than a loose concept. I'd take the chance and flesh it out for the workshop with a pilot even if it's a little rough, because stories are more about execution than summary. (I'm not a moderator)
this breaks two seperate rules a)no crit outside the workshop and b) no external attachments for crit
