1. alpacinoutd

    alpacinoutd Senior Member

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    I'm looking for an alternative for "coated" and "dusted" to create an adjective.

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    I'm looking for an alternative for "coated" and "dusted" to create an adjective.

    The moist-coated tree branches swayed in the breeze.

    The snow-dusted branches swayed in the breeze.

    In the above examples, what can I use instead of "coated" or "dusted"?

    Can I use "filmed"? Would this work?

    The moist-filmed tree branches...
     
  2. LadySerpentine

    LadySerpentine New Member

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    Do you mean moisture? It might sound better if it were more specific:
    "The tree branches, shimmering with dew drops, swayed in the breeze."
    "Rain-speckled tree branches swayed in the breeze."

    "White, frosty branches swayed in the breeze."
    "Snow-covered branches swayed in the breeze."
     
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    Blanketed.
     
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    "covered"
     
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    Not a synonym, but “laden”?

    As in snow laden branches
     
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    Well, to my POV, those would mean:
    • "Dusted" - lightly covered, generally not consistently
    • "Coated" - heavily covered, consistently
    • "Blanketed" - very heavily covered
    • "Filmed" - a light cover but consistently
    "Moist-filmed" sounds extremely awkward. I would not connect the two parts with a dash, either.

    That's just me.
     
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    Have you found the solution?
     

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