1. Steve_Cee

    Steve_Cee New Member

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    Referencing single letters and specific words.

    Discussion in 'Word Mechanics' started by Steve_Cee, Mar 15, 2023.

    Hello,

    I am creating a game and would like to know the proper way to write a message that references single letters and single words. Below is my best attempt:

    Great job, you found a clue. A newspaper with the headline Gold Standard News. The letters G in "Gold" and N in "News" are emboldened.
     
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    Xoic Prognosticator of Arcana Ridiculosum Contributor Blogerator

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    That toally works, but other approaches could work as well. For instance rather than quotation marks around the words Gold and News you could have just italicized them. And I would probably say Bolded rather than Emboldened. I think the word Emboldened only refers to making a person more courageous, not bolding letters. See, I think what I just did works too—I didn't italicize either Bolded or Emboldened, just capitalized them. You probably don't even need to italicize your single G and N either. Sometimes simpler is better. I try to go as simple as I can, as long as it's still clear. So I might just say:

    Great job, you found a clue—a newspaper with the headline Gold Standard News with the G in Gold and the N in News bolded.
    I decided to use an em-dash rather than a period after Clue, because it probably should be one sentence. The second part is explaining what the clue is that's been found. Separating it into two sentences sounds a bit off to me. In fact I just turned it all into one sentence. It seems to flow a little better. And reading over it again, I think I would take out the in Gold and in News at the end, but I think it's just a sample sentence used to demonstratre something, isn't it? Just to show what I mean:

    Great job, you found a clue—a newspaper with the headline Gold Standard News with the G and the N bolded.
    It isn't perfect, because there is another N (a lower-case one), but I don't think it's confusing because you're using a capitol N to refer to the other capitol N.
     
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  3. KiraAnn

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    You could be subtle and write:
    Great job, you found a clue—a newspaper with the headline Gold Standard News
     

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