Hi , i would like some help in a chapter of my book. The main character ( She´s a cop) find out that the criminal she's looking for, is going to receive a drug delivery in the docks. So she´s already on the place, waiting for him with other cops. Someone can give me some ideias about what can happen when the criminal arrives to the docks. Im having a writers bloock. Ps: the criminal is obcessed by her, and do everything to manipulate her.
Probably the best place where he would have a chance to manipulate her is in the interrogation after the arrest than the arrest itself.
Arrive with collateral. Imagine if they showed up with a family member as a hostage, total power move.
Well, the setup basically screams for bloodshed. A kind of cliche thing one could expect would be a rival gang showing up and bullets start flying. In the ensuing chaos, your protagonist and the criminal guy might actually get into a situation where they have to fight side by side to escape the common enemy. Variation: the rival gang is actually corrupt cops who recognize their colleague and are hellbent on disposing of her as a witness now...
This, i feel fits well. The arrest goes too perfectly just so he can get closer to her. Then from there begin to play games with here.
He may say something provocative. Get beaten up. Pretend to be a victim and be set free. The main character will receive a scolding from her superiors. The rumor will begin about the criminal that he is in some kind of relationship with the police officer, and that he is a rat. It would be a funny story. Imagine. The cop girl gets a restraining order. Other criminals will be chasing the criminal, considering him a rat. She is the only person he can trust. At this point, you can think of a lot of funny situations ...
