Hey everyone, I have two projects I'm looking to get feedback on. 1) An opening chapter for an upmarket fiction novel I'm currently working on 2) The first act of a high fantasy novel (the book is complete but I need some help with feedback on Act 1) [this is about as rough as ASOIF] You do not need to read all of (2). Read as much as you can. I'll read your story and give feedback on yours as well. Preferably I'd want you to read for enjoyment and just put it down when it drags or tell me how compelling the plot was. Please PM me if interested and then send me your story in whichever way you prefer. Thank you.
