Here is the video: This is my first skit I basically scripted, filmed, acted, and edited it. I eventually want to create funny short films like Key & Peele. If anyone has any feedback on how: 1) I can improve my punchlines 2) Or where I can generate ideas for scripting 3) As well as how I can make my video look even more professionally filmed Please post them!
Hello Daniel, you sound like a very talented guy! I've never seen a video posted for review before on these forums. It's not really done. And I'm not sure that "character development" is the right place for feedback on a script. There is a Workshop on these forums for scripts, but it's a two-for-one set-up. You must do two reviews before you can post your script for review. here's the link to the scripts Workshop: https://www.writingforums.org/workshop/scripts-and-screenplays/
