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  1. Harmonices

    Harmonices Senior Member

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    What have you learned about your writing?

    Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by Harmonices, Feb 22, 2019.

    In the few weeks I've spent here, I've learned a lot of useful things about how I write, and hopefully how to make it better. These are some of the things I've discovered so far that I need to work on / keep an eye out for:

    • My dialogue frequently yaks on too long
    • My point of view is often all over the place
    • I don't always show enough
    • My characters are usually strong
    • My prose generally reads well
    • I have no idea how to punctuate properly (amazing how I managed with meeting minutes, press releases, social media updates, networking online and all the rest for so long! I guess that sort of stuff is meagre fare compared to storytelling)
    • I need to build in more interior monologue for my characters
    What have you gleaned about your writing?
     
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    Some Guy Manguage Langler Supporter Contributor

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    • Grammar sucks.
    • My grammer especially sucks.
    • Punctuation sucks, especially mine.
    • No infodump.
    • No trying to disguise infodump.
    • Do not bombard the reader with too much at once.
    • Stop trying to lead the reader, dammit.
    • My personal challenge is to write entirely in dialog. I fail miserably.
    • There's more to my story than I thought, dammit.
    • Worldbuilding is tough, and fun. Destroying the world is funner! :D
     
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    Harmonices Senior Member

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    • I need to target my descriptive language more tightly - don't use lazy generic words, use specific ones that actually paint a picture.
    • I'm starting to get the hang of this POV thing.
    • I really do need to make more effort to show, and examine where I'm telling too much.
    • My grammar remains terrible.
     
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    paperbackwriter Banned Contributor

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    ive learnt that my view of the world is not necessarily relatable. im too self deprecatory or cynical.
     
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    Ruckus Banned

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    Writing is thinking on paper. Writing things down helps me work through problems I other wisemight struggle with. It helps to conceptualize it like paying for something in cash as opposed to plastic.
     
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    Alex R. Encomienda Contributor Contributor

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    I might sound pretentious but here it is:

    • I tend to either tell too much in narrative or I overuse dialogue.
    • I tend to use my characters as mouthpieces for my own ideologies
    • I focus quite a lot on philosophical ideas throughout dialogue.
    • I sometimes incorporate things in my writing that only I "get" and assume readers have my mind state.
    • I do use a little too much adjectives sometimes.
    • I get overzealous about a certain idea that I want to push and it comes out as preachy.
     
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    J.T. Woody Book Witch Contributor

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    • when i get really in to a scene, i tend to write too fast and it REALLY shows in my spelling and grammar
    • i cant just work on one piece at a time, because i experience burn out and writers block (my mind constantly has to be doing something, even if it means working on something else for a while then going back to a main project)
    • i'm too descriptive (says my professor)
    (i have to think more on this!)
     
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    Harmonices Senior Member

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    • Stop abusing adverbs and adjectives
    • Scan for those loose words that don't add to the writing and cull
    (baby stuff)
     
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    Night Herald The Fool Contributor

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    • I tend to overwrite
    • Then I underwrite in an effort to compensate
    • My prose oscillates between bland and purple, sometimes striking a healthy balance
    • Dialogue is one of my strengths.
    • I sometimes go overboard on the narration/internal monologues
    • I am bad at plotting
    • I am less bad at characterization. Sometimes I'm downright decent at it
    • I'm even less bad at setting
    • I have good ideas, but I don't always know how to implement them well
    • I am not very good at writing long forms (i.e. novels and that) but I enjoy it immensely
    • I'm good at giving old phrases a new turn
    • I often struggle to see the whole picture; I can get caught up on smaller units of content
    • I often struggle with tension and momentum
    • My descriptive language is so-so
     

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