If you create conflict in a story, you cannot really help but create conflicting characters. I understand it's difficult to create a unique voice,...
Means a lot thank you! :)
Thanks so much, beyond inspiring! I will definitely add the suggestions to my list! :)
I hope one day I finish it so you may be able to :)
I'm also SO glad you said this :) the novel totally subscribes to the fact that memories in one way or another help tackle the problem of...
That's a really lovely and informative passage for you to share @jannert thank you! The novel tries to focus on the influence of love on...
Thanks for the interest and observations - I've tried my very best to map out a realistic timeline for the protagonist's life. As has already been...
Having read the extract, I agree with some in that the first line adds nothing for me. Why not ensconce it into the second, infinitely more...
I appreciate the comments, fundamental issues I'd planned for well in advance. Firstly, I'm from the UK not US, and the protagonist was born...
Very true! :)
Appreciate the reference @Tenderiser - certainly a few interesting bits of reading to restore my faith in the novel :) One specific worry, I...
Personally, I'd say if your first chapter dwells on the weather and finds it central to constructing the early narrative, then stick with your...
I've been reasonably ambitious with my first attempt at a novel. I'm five chapters and about 15,000 words in. The story is a re-telling of various...
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