I love audiobooks if the reader is really good. I have been disappointed when readers have been mediocre and kinda ruined a good book with silly...
Wait, is this the beginning to a really good novel centering a narcissistic personality, or a honest rant? I am so confused...but if this is a...
Haha, thanks guys. I will check out Secrets and Lies. My main concern is I don't want to stereotype or over characterize the relationship.
Hello! I am currently drafting a YA novel where the protagonist is adopted. She is Thai, but was adopted by a Caucasian couple as a small child...
Hahaha, I love this. I am somewhat confused at the purpose of the conversation...but I refuse to believe that other people are that...
Hm...27. Not too bad... I have quite a few on the list that I feel are repeats (Narnia Chronicles and Lion, Witch, Wardrobe, Hamlet and the...
Thank you! :D
I am just another aspiring writer who would like to get published one day! I have come to improve my writing skills. I hope to meet a lot of...
Too many prepositional phrases. Makes the sentence too wordy. Maybe something like, Eh...I think that is still probably too many preposition...
....modest apples? ....oranges? I don't think the sentence is all that incredible to begin with...can you modify it? "Sat on her chest does not...
Separate names with a comma.