Not sure if the OP is still looking for feedback or whether this has just degraded into "GLOBAL WARMING LOL" "read the science!" "Nah. Fox news,...
the short answer is no. A reader should never describe your plot as convoluted. If you write your story well, it will make perfect sense to the...
That is a not invalid point. Most people don't realise this, but backpacks these days have high tech harness systems built into them that disperse...
The more you tell me about this story, the more I like it. You're right about the details though. The big advantage of option 2 is that you don't...
If he's hunting his own food, he's going to need a good knife to prepare food. Maybe several, depending on how snobby he is.
This is actually a well used technique. The villain is established in the first scene as being way stronger than the protagonist and friends. Then...
I'm sure it's been said before, but the problem with cliches is that we've seen them before. S hundred times. And if you aren't going to add...
Separate names with a comma.