I like her. I think a little more in the beginning of her story (the gladiator part) should be more on luck then skill though. But she sounds...
Having the skill to be a good assassin seems a little far fetched to me. Especially since he gets out of slavery at eleven so thats not a long...
Hero and villain are just terms. Villains are usually people who are just evil to be evil. Heroes are the people (men usually) who are awesome...
They all sound peaceful. If they all mistrust and/or hate each other, then maybe shouldn't more then the humans be ambitious or something? Also,...
I'm no pro at anatomy, so I wouldn't take this totally to heart, but is sounded a little questionable that she could wear full body armor and move...
Sounds like a good plan for a start of your world. Very basic, but its enough to make me interested to look into it.
If it is important to the story (which I'm assuming it is because you're asking) then a brief description would be necessary at least. For people...
Prompt: People Make me Sick Rayland slowly stretched, giving a long jaw popping yawn. Rubbing his eyes, he glanced around. He was still on...
I write fantasy 90% of the time. So, I'll jot down notes on the characters, and the world/cultures around them. Sometimes I'll write down a very...
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Thanks Iulia. I'm glad it didn't disappoint.
I lost my Shadow two years ago about. I still cry sometimes when I think about her. She was my dog, not the families dog. My parents got her...
Honestly, the best I can tell you is to read and to practice. But, besides that, you can go and narrate things. Like, when you're watching a...
Prompt: Piano All eyes watched as the man’s fingers did their magic. Skimming over the keys, the man closed his ocean colored eyes. His broad...
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