Obvious he needs to develop the character past charisma and charming traits in order for the romance to be believable. But what I mean with him...
wow that sounds much better i can see that working a lot since now it pretty much answers all the living questions that came about due to the...
Cool hope you like it down here. Everything pr is pretty modern so you probably wont miss much from the states, however hope to get more info on...
I wish i could but cant have to rely on pictures lol i live in puerto rico and not even the prettiest suburb here resembles the suburbs in cali....
No problem. At the end of the day a charismatic chatracter can win anybodys heart. Glad to have helped.
If you really like the idea of her living at the retirement homethen i suggest not putting to much enfasis as to why she lives there because even...
I just added that bit into my description i loved it it says a lot without having to thanks.you've been a real help wicked. :d
I'D MAKE CLAIRE LIVE IN HER GRANDMAS OLD MANOR BUT AT THE SAME TIME HAVE HER WORK AT THE RETIREMENT HOME. THAT WAY IN FUTURE SCENES SHE AND YOUR...
THANKS WICKED. LOVED SOME OF THE THINGS YOU SAID. IM STILL WRITING AS I READ YOUR POSTS. HERE ARE SOME OF MY IDEAS Houses with flowers and...
Funny you should mention your plot because something similar happened to me like a year ago. I was dating someone i meet on face book, and the...
yes things that are exactly like that although the area is very high class. was doing research it takes place in beverly hills california but...
I have a vampire story i'm writing as well and i think its something that happens to all of us. We tend to think of twilight when we think of...
lol at least you answered. I'm really hoping for descriptions of anything really of homes of streets. I'm really bad with that sort of thing, but...
HI GUYS, I'VE BEEN LURKING ON THIS FORUM FOR QUITE A WHILE, BUT JUST JOINED THE OTHER DAY. I'M IMPRESSED WITH THE FULL ON SUPPORT GIVEN TO...
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