@Jack Asher : I do so like the idea of Godzilla shitting the President onto the Whitehouse lawn. Please, please tell me that's been done in a book...
Hah! Love your signature pic, @Stacy C. I still play that game for hours even now.
No, it needs to be correct grammar - he's good with words; his affectations are just.... His 'thing'.... So I might opt for 'who' then. Thanks.
No, that is actually part of what he says, but thank you - the way you've structured it works pretty well if I rebuild it as: "Well now, kiddo....
Aha ..... Yes, without knowing the context, it does seem really hard to make it out..... Ok - here's the line in context of the rest of the...
Right, I'm trying to build a sentence of dialogue, uttered by one of my characters with - well - an idiosyncratic way of speaking. Here's what he...
Tell you who I sometimes had problems with: Arthur C Clarke. I remember reading one of the 2001 sequels, and he set up this highly intense - I...
Thanks all.... That's all been very useful in shaping my plans for the book. Thinking of this more as a paid-for hobby as @ChickenFreak described...
Not sure if this is the right place for this question, but it concerns the route to self-publishing, so.... Who here actually uses professional...
Not just me then? That makes me feel better. Though I need to work out a way to stop the compulsive editing-on-the-fly.
I've written before about how painfully slowly I write. Today I've put in four hours and rattled out....... Two pages! Two.... Friggin'.......
Well what's happening is I'll be writing dialogue and the thought goes: well so-and-so would want to question this; then the other person would...
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