Thanks for these insights. :)
Thanks for your thoughts, architectus. I've already started rewriting, and I'm developing her into a more mature character, but still with some...
Sorry, I didn't realize I was breaking any forum rules. EDIT: I see now. I must have overlooked that, sorry. I just felt that the text would...
Mammamaia, I will definitely take that into consideration. Thank you. Jenna Whitefield, thank you for your kind words. :) And don't worry,...
Okay, thanks for letting me know.
Thank you all for your insight! This helps a lot as I begin to rewrite. I appreciate your time. :)
Thanks, Cheeno. I will definitely keep that in mind as I reread and edit.
Good point. Thank you.
Marina, that will definitely be my next step. I just got the email from the agent a little over an hour ago, and plan to share it with...
Thanks for the replies. I've tried to shape my character into one that readers would sympathize with. She certainly has personality, but isn't...
Hi! I've got a question, and I'm not exactly sure if anyone is able to answer without having read my novel, but I figured I'd ask it anyway. :)...
Wow! Thank you so much for these honest answers. This is just what I needed to know. :D
Crimsonrose, Best of luck to you with this story. It sounds wonderful! I just wrote a modern day Beauty and the Beast story, except it's...
Thanks so much for this advice! The information I read on the internet today about this was pretty misleading. - Kid
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