It would need to be in your own voice, but this type of construction will put in the pause you're looking for and still keep the flow: “Where’s...
Morgan, my advice would be to let someone read your book, and get some feedback on the length. If the pages flow and one chapter speeds by after...
Soulmates: Strings of Fate
I've heard many of the points raised here from lots of writers over the years, and I do think that when faced with all the realities of...
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