This is very good, makes 'me' fear the character a bit. I can see why you fear her. nor does the blood I spill, nor the flesh I maim. A little...
It is not possible to write poetic if you cannot find clarity. A poem in itself is clear and concise. I've had my hand in poetry for some time and...
Even smooth floors creek ;)
"Three footsteps sounded against the floorboards and a female face emerged into the light." You could write it like: "The sound of footsteps...
I have no idea what fum, foom, or foom means so this is all over my head but I gotta say yall got a laugh outta me there :)
I apologize it is 'Balk'. Thats to stop short. Oops :)
It's to stop suddenly, generally in horse terms. But a person can bawk, it's only to stop suddenly or short.
Greetings fellow writers. I would like to discuss the use of 'ed' vs 'ing'. Im unsure as to which is best. There are times that I use both "She...
Separate names with a comma.