I think that's perfectly acceptable, so long as it's optional. That sounds like a really interesting way to gather reviews. The only thing I might...
@Tesoro I was trying to have there be a bit more action involved, since focusing too much on the emotional part would be something the MC would...
@DueNorth This is exactly what I'm trying to have happen. The feelings don't have anywhere to go so they would be affecting his mood, and his...
@theoriginalmonsterman I don't think he's the sort of character who would be comfortable talking to a therapist, unfortunately. He would likely...
I was thinking that some sort of shock or event might be a good thing to sort of tip him over the edge. I don't think his lover would want to make...
Hi there, I’m trying to do some set up for an emotional scene, but was looking for some feedback on how. The story is sci-fi, set in space. The...
Thank you very much to both of you. :D
Torch
Just joined up and dropping in to say hello! I've been hobby writing for quite a few years, and Role Playing on forums and with friends for...
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