Stephen King's book "On Writing" has some really good tips about this, particularly regarding effective description. The gist of it is don't bog...
Very cool exercise. It's the sort of thing one might do to prepare to shift from prose to screenwriting, where of course a characters' thoughts...
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Interesting (but not so uncommon dilemma). The advice people gave about giving your character a sense of humor seems nice, although I think you...
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