This reads like a catalogue. Do we need to know the beard length, hair condition, and clothing or everyone he meets?
Of course he can. There can be more at stake than death, as there are far worse fates than dying.
Elements of Style.
She needs a lot more candles than that ;)
And coupled with the content, create a cliché. This is only my opinion and I don't care to argue; I won't pretend I'm speaking in facts as other...
In the context, it makes perfect sense.
You can't talk in absolutes. Never write back story is as misleading as never use an adjective or a fragmented sentence. Most things are fine in...
The two examples the poster gave aren't side by side, they're from different points in the text. Formal writing rules, such as no run-on...
I wouldn't go so far as to say I'd rather write than breathe (you don't get the former without the latter!), writing is simply great fun!
I would choose neither the good story poorly written nor the poor story well written. We are chalk and cheese; no reason not to get along, though....
If the prologue enriches the story, the fact it's absence would harm the story makes it integral, IMHO.
Oh, you're breaking the rule on purpose? Hope it works out!
Separate names with a comma.