I just got some arguably bad advice: try forfeiting adverbs and adjectives when you write and just use stronger nouns, it'll make your story...
So I can't use the antecedent himself to refer back to a 'weapon of mass destruction', rather, it should refer back to a person, in this case a...
I wrote a few variations since the OP so you're going to have to be more specific. I'm confused as to what you mean here.
I had a faint feeling that would be the answer. Nevertheless, I'll keep that in mind.
Thank you. I'll need to focus on improving the clarity of my sentences. If it's not too much to ask, would either of you know of or recommend...
I'm waiting for him to see my variations. I'm not sure if I can still supply the same information if I break that sentence up any further than...
Thank you kindly. I was trying to convey that sentence from a character's perspective; the narrator does not view the 'weapon' as a person, they...
Reflexive Pronoun and Subject Agreement Trouble? * This turned into a little more than reflexive pronoun trouble; if interested, please refer to...
Comma Splices and Capitalizing I'm having trouble with commas, dialogue, and comma splices among other things. (I did a quick search, but I'd...
I'm Rague, sorcerer supreme. To those that catch that reference, you understand that I am incredibly nerdy. Enjoyed writing since I was in 2nd...
Separate names with a comma.