I finally got a piece of poetry published!! It was actually a piece that I workshopped a bit here and then submitted so thank you for the...
I have to add 2 cents here (to all the other 2 cents that have been given). A lot of people here have referenced your age - I hate to echo that...
Majicou has a good suggestion there. The more details YOU know about the character the easier it will be to make them "real" on the page. The...
Here are my thoughts on it - and you (and others) might completely disagree. But, I think your ending is good. as mentioned previously, it is...
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