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  1. Simpson17866

    Simpson17866 Contributing Member Contributor

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    5500 word horror story

    Discussion in 'Collaboration' started by Simpson17866, Apr 13, 2016.

    Would anybody be willing to take a look at this before I try sending this out? It's basically a twist on the classic "finding out that your neighbor was murdered but that you can't call the police".
     
  2. doggiedude

    doggiedude Contributing Member Contributor

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    I can read through it and give you an general opinion. I'm not a grammar expert.
     
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    Tenderiser Not a man Contest Administrator Supporter Contributor

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    Is this the same 5k story I critiqued and didn't receive a reply to?
     
  4. Simpson17866

    Simpson17866 Contributing Member Contributor

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    Thank you very much :)

    ... No, that was a different one :( Just sent you a PM
     
  5. Shadowfax

    Shadowfax Contributing Member Contributor

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    Hi Simpson,

    I'm game to read it.
     

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