We have a lot of threads where people just want an opinion on something small, not really a thread worthy question. The one I have right now is, " ... When they ask to be her friend, she’ll say, yes,” I said as I watched another satellite cross the rings. Or " ... When they ask to be her friend, she’ll say, yes,” I said aloud as I watched another satellite cross the rings. She's talking to herself and it's clear when you read the whole paragraph. I just wondered if I should emphasize that fact by adding 'aloud'? See how that's not really thread worthy? Of course we'll have to ask @dillseed not to spam the thread with general grammar questions. So maybe it needs to be something titled: Opinions on my WIP: do you favor this, or that? or The sounding board: on my WIP, do you favor this, or that? I wonder how others feel about it. Or is it too confusing and/or unnecessary and such questions belong in the general writing sub-forum?