Character Creation Workshop (Part 1 Villains)

Discussion in 'Character Development' started by Raven, Oct 28, 2007.

  1. What Happens Next?

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    Isaac -- World Dominator

    Issac, 24, is a medium shadowy figure who is regularly seen at the local coffee shop planning world domination. Mostly commanding spacemen, he also appeals to genetic scientists, six legged monkeys, and cybernetic guru(s). His fair looks and gifted genius makes him one of the most charasmatic villians of all time.

    Specializing in world domination with a BA in National Government & World Destruction and Enslavement, he is fully prepared to take down any one, politicaly and economically. Training as a Psionic, Isaac has mastered the art of using machines to guide his telekentic powers.

    Born in 2704 in a family with a reputation of villiany, Isaac had the support of becoming what he wanted to be. Evil is simply a matter of family genetics.
    Usually found in dark long rain coats, Isaac can usually be found hidden within the dark crowds of most undercities. His twin pistols, concealed within his coat, along with sword and telekentic skills, make him deadlier then ever...
     
  2. nacreous

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    (whoops! just noticed that this thread is for villains. this should go under heros. sorry. That makes this even better, you know, that you have split this up into heroes, villains, and supporters.)

    what a fantastic thread... what a cool idea. what a great way to develop your characters, than by announcing their presence and description to the world?

    It is things like this which make this site at least slightly better than the writingforum.com.

    anyway, Kaleef is a small black kid from philly, a poor waif, thin and frail and scared of his neighbors and classmates. He is an avid reader, seeking to escape his brutal and squalid life in the dark, sick city. He regresses to an earlier and safer state through excape into classic literature, and in particular the classic works of horror. Many kids here do that, you know. Thats what kind of place this is. So, He is materialistic, but is easily persuaded to give up this habit as it is not fully ingrained as of yet. He also does not like meat so much, thinking it is rather grosssss! He comes from a violent society, but he is centered enough to understand that violence is utterly irrelevant to a good life. He quickly chooses a life without horrors, in the world of monsters who are really rather Buddhist in nature. He leaves his life for that of a blue-green dragon in the land of horrors.
    pretty paradoxical, huh? BTW, I have no clear idea what this kid looks like, and that kind of bothers me.

    anyway, thats for this great thread!
    cheers
     
  3. ChimmyBear

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    Jonathon Preston, a handsomely tall man who just turned 42, looks himself over in the mirror. His dark hair falling across a deeply tanned forehead, causes him to squint. Standing there in the gas station restroom, he traces the lines on his face, reflecting the cruel harshness of a life scarred by too many bad decisions. Blood from his large hands swirl into the running water, as it disappears down a rusty drain. Jonathon never really enjoys his work, as killing people for hire doesn't come naturally to him. Often he detests the way holding a knife into some guys gut makes him feel; however, it's a part of his small town life now. An unnatural choice he gave himself over to, long ago. Oh sure, he can get away with it easily enough. He has the perfect cover, who would ever think an insurance agent could be a killer? Many times a costumer will sit in front of him and he can always make them feel welcome and relaxed; never once sensing the turmoil which rolls under his careful demeanor. It is so easy to manipulate these peons, if they only knew the truth, he is sure they would run like pigs. Laughing at the notion, Jonathon stares blankly at himself..."You are a God, my friend...a true giver and taker of life and you make me sick." Turning up the collar of his dark trench coat, he so often wears on these jobs, he turns and walks away.
    Mr. Adams, his 1:15, is standing on the corner...he should be no problem at all.
     
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    Senator Linda McCall is devoutly Christian, and even when she cannot attend her home parish because of the demands of her job, she always attends services on Sunday wherever she is. She has been married to J. B. McCall, of McCall Aerospace, for 17 years, but has recently suspected he may not have been faithful throughout their marriage. Her eldest daughter, Faith, used to be an A student, but lately her grades have been slipping, and Linda is worried she may be doing drugs. So far, she has not found any proof, however, even after searching her room on four separate occasions.

    Last month, she was nominated as running mate to Presidential candidate Thomas Calhoun. She does not trust Calhoun, and believes he would do almost anything for a vote. But her prospects of becoming the first woman Vice President are looking very promising indeed; so much so that she has already begun drafting a sweeping set of initiatives that will bring forth a new moral foundation for a country slipping into sin.
     
  5. Smithy

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    Now if I was writing that story she'd be the heroine. But anyway.

    Quirian, 'born' specimen 519, is the last survivor of an arcane bio-engineering experiment. For a while he attempted to pass himself off as a human being, falling in love with a young maiden of a noble family, but he was betrayed and forced to turn upon his creators, destroying as many of them as he could. In his rampage the girl died, and he has spent 3,000 years looking into ways he might resurrect her. Desperate for revenge upon the descendants of those who made him, he took the name The Warlock as it was more frightening than Quirian, and determined to snuff out every last remnant of the Empire.

    His personality varies between affectations of extreme villainy and private revelations of extreme sensitivity. His long life span has meant that one by one all those he knew and counted friends have died, and he feels profoundly alone. So much so that when the last of his opponents who knew something of his past is killed the Warlock weeps for him, and for himself, since "we are only alone when the last who remembers is gone." Although he is prepared to do ruthless to achieve the crowning victory, he also retains a chivalrous side, evinced by his gentlemanly conduct towards the woman he intends to sacrifice in a quasi religious ritual. He dies by being shot in the back after he had surrendered to the Imperial forces.
     
  6. Shadownite

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    Ebonaga Ezra, a member of a race of long-lived anthromorphic bird-folk and the son of an ancient hero, who is also the current ruler of Ebon's tribe. His clothing varies, but usually he carries a sword of some sort that he seldom uses. He has brown and black feathers instead of hair, is about 5, 10 and about 112 years old. He dislikes conflict and prefers to handle situations with his intelligence, but is unopposed to fighting for the 'right' causes. Most people see him as a wise and brilliant figure.
    Starting when he was in his 40s and continuing to the present day he travels across the continent as an ambassador for his people. Prior to this he trained himself and became a sought after teacher of the sword.
    He noticed that the largest countries were corrupted and in need of guidance, lest the people eradicate themselves. at first he was content to help the people where he could and try to set the right example, but when his latest apprentice was killed during a bandit raid that was ignored by passing knights, he determined that the ruling government was beyond salvaging, and starting planning a course of action to overthrow it and 'save' the people.

    Cliched, but the mindset of a villain with the goals of a hero is something i find fascinating, especially when its compared to the hero.
     
  7. BrinkofDawn

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    Balter Quintin Garnencias is the Lord Mystic of the kingdom of the same name. He is 45 years of age, about 6'2 with a muscular build sporting sleeked back black hair with several small strands hanging down his face. He has a reddish-brownish tint to his eye color and has a thin mustache along down the sides of his mouth and a soul patch under his lip (pretty much a goatee) over his strong chin.
    He is very formal, wanting to dress nicely to gain attention to his peers. He talks formally and pleasantly with anyone and everyone, often smiling to be polite and courteous. He never speaks out of character as he speaks the say way to everyone and always seems to know more than he puts on. This is true, in fact, as he doesn't like people to know his plans or ambitions until he is ready to speak. When someone does discover something about him he dismisses it as if nothing happened.
    He is a plotter and schemer like any politician, yet he is very good at keeping secrets compared to the other Mystics. Having studied countless books about government and warfare he is a tactical genius and general of his own special military aside from the joint military of Percadia, Garnencia, and Magysta. He is witty and cunning and his intellect far surpasses that of the other Mystics in terms of warfare.

    He was adopted by Drakel Quintin, the advisor of the former Lord of Garnencia. He was well educated and went to expensive schools, becoming more intelligent than the average child and finished school at 14 years of age. He found a place in politics like his father shortly after school and soon took his father's position after his death. He married a woman named Danaas and had a child in which he named after his father. He loved his wife and newborn child and was happy with his life until a mysterious riot broke out within the capitol of Garnencia. Men were killing men for no reason and the previous Lord Garnencia, in some state of madness murdered his family and killed himself. It was believed that Balter's wife and infant son perished in the riots and in his grief almost committed suicide when a voice suddenly spoke to him assuring him that his son was alive and that Balter would see his son again if he would do what the voice told him to do. Balter agreed and took the vacant spot as the new Lord of Garnencia.

    He established a new, small military force in defense of the capitol called the Red Shield and offered an alliance with the neighboring kingdoms of Percadia and Magysta as to have each kingdom have control of the same military with the exception of the Shield forces, which the other kingdoms took into consideration of establishing. Having formed an alliance he expanded his reach of dominance with his neighbors and set up secret facilities within the neighboring kingdoms to set up a field of control and also conduct experiments with ancient artifacts, power sources, and weapons.

    When he Balter discovered the existence an ancient curse (known as the Arkane curse) spreading across the world and the cause being an infinite source of darkness called Pandemonium, he assessed the situation and sought to somehow control the strange calamity knowing a source of power like that could control the world.

    His motives are to create a world of peace fitting for the day his son returns and he can welcome him with open arms.

    ...So, how does that sound?^^ This is one of the villains in my current project I've been working on for several years. His name was originally Bahl but I decided to change it. What do you think?
     
  8. Rhapsody

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    Donald Wallace Ward, 40s. 5'6", rather unassuming looking man with glasses and thinning brown hair. Obvious middle age spread. Dresses upscale middle class, was at one point an stockbroker before his psychic talent developed: the ability to speak with the dead. Was the tenth (and latest) necropath in the United States, and one of the four who went insane from using the talent. Travelled through nine states on a violent murder spree before he was captured. Final body count: 29 people, all connected to any of the 18 ghosts he was known to talk to, over the course of five years. Attempted an insanity plea due to outside influence from the voices of the dead, was convicted of 26 counts of first degree murder and 3 counts of second degree murder. Currently awaiting execution on death row in Dallas County, Texas.
     
  9. Shadow Dragon

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    Name-Ares Pyrrhus

    Age-22

    Species- Demi-God (human father, mother is a god)

    Physical Characteristics- Ares is five feet, nine inches tall. He is very thin. He has red eyes with a slit like pupil, similar to eyes of a cat. His eyes often seem to glow right before he kills someone. He wears a black cloak while in public, he wears black colored light-weight metal armor underneath his cloak that covers his abdomen, left arm, and legs. His hair is black and goes down to his shoulders. he has a tattoo of a dragon that wraps around his right arm.

    Personality- Ares believes the those that stand in his way should be destroyed. He is very sadistic and loves to see fear in the eyes of those he is about to kill. However, he only kills the people that he thinks deverves to die. He will defend his allies to the death, but he is merciless to his enemies. He hates corruption and slavery with a passion.

    Specialty- Ares is a ruthless assassin and a talented thief. The main advantage he has over others in a fight is that he can move at incredible speed.

    Backstory- After Raze, the mother of the gods, gave birth to Ares, she gave him to an elderly couple in the small town of Ivis to raise. When he turned three, the town was attacked by a crime syndicate. Most of the people were killed, but the leader decided to keep Ares as a personal slave. The leader of the syndicate was very cruel and would often abuse Ares just for the fun of it. On Ares'es tenth birthday he was bringing dinner to his master but he tripped and spilled it. His master got angry and started to beat Ares mercilessly. After a few minutes of the abuse he grabed Ares by the throat and held him against the wall. To the suprise of the syndicate leader he didn't see any fear in the eyes of Ares. Instead he saw pure hatred. This made the syndicate leader laugh. He leaned closer to Ares and whispered "You will never be anything more than a slave. Now apologise for wasting my time and go make me some dinner." For Ares this was the final straw. He dug into his master's with his hands. His master threw Ares to the ground and began to run around blindly. Ares grabbed a knife and began to stab is master over and over again. When his master died Ares grabed his keys and ran. While escaping his home he ran by one of the slave cages. There was a young elf girl in thier who looked to be about the same age as Ares. He convinced the girl to escape with him. Ares and the girl survived by stealing whatever they needed. eventually they both became skilled with weapons and became assassins. After a few years of killing people for the syndicates and noble families, he grew tired of the high level of corruption that existed. Ares decided that the best way to end the corruption was to destroy all the syndicates and nations on the continent of Xen and create a new empire where people would find success based on thier intellect and talent instead of someone succeeding based on what family they were born into.
     
  10. Gouloon

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    [QUOTE = myself]Isaac M. Archer
    Isaac Asimov
    [Archytas

    Appearance
    Looks like a shrewed businessman should, a nice suit, nice hair, and shiny leather shoes. He stands at about 5' 10" and wears alot of gold. He wears an eyepatch to hide his cybernetic left eye.

    Attitude
    At times, he's described as cold and calculating, his very few personal friends regard him as charming, witty, and funny.

    Specialty
    Abnormally high IQ, Aptitude for business, ties to organized crime

    Age
    46

    Clark was born shortly before the age of robots, a very turbulent transition occured, when a global arms race occured. Clark's father was killed in a skirmish overseas. The shock of losing her husband to war caused his mother to turn to a dangerous cult for support. Under the influence of the Atlantis cult, Clark developed an almost super human intellect. Soon, Clark reached his late teenage years, at just 14, he already had a college degree. Sadly, his mother, under the influence of the Atlanteans, comitted suicide. Despite all of his intelligence, he could never figure out why the cult would take his mother from him. With no where to go, and no one to support him, Clark finally lost it. After building a suit of armor, he tried, alone to storm an Atlantean strong hold. The attack failed, and he was almost killed. Thanks to the efforts of the superhero, Moon shade, he was rescued.

    Clark was adopted by Moonshade as an apprentice. He never lost his feelings of vengence, but learned how to better control his anger. Now, as a young adult, Clark has become a globe-trotting adventurer and broker of rare and mystical artifacts., always watched by the Atlanteans. During a trip to the central African jungle, Clark stumbled upon something that would change his life. An ancient spaceship. Clark began to deeply study the mechanics of this spaceship, eventually launching a business in robotics called Arbots inc. Something else found in the ship has obsessed Clark with power. An extrastellar conscienceness. Now, Clark uses his authority and power to work towards one goal, an army of telekenetic robots with which he plans to rule with an iron fist.
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    Any opinions will be greatly appreciated.
     
  11. Arrakna

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    It is still rather early stages, but I suppose that is what this is for.



    Mapuche's gender it not known, but is believed to be a female so will be regarded as a "she". Her full-length is roughly 5'5" and is she is part of the Nguruvilu race, which means she has a head resembling a fox with large orange eyes. She has 2 arms with 3 digits on each, armed with sharp claws. Her body is incredibly muscular as is her thick tail; which must be used to both balance her and maneuver her around at pace. A light brown coat of fur covers her body but the Nguruvilu race can range in color from dark brown to a creamy white.

    Little is known about her past but the important thing for her; and for other people to know about her is that she is working for the King as his guard. She is a very skilled warrior and specializes in sword combat which explains her special sword she has with her at almost all times.

    Her age is not known and what's more there is not much known about her race to gain an accurate concept on life-expectancy, but she is most likely 1/3 of the way through her life.

    The reason she works as an assassin and guard is largely due to the fact that the King is the most powerful man in the galaxy and despite the fact she could easily kill him in a single swipe, she instead chooses to work with him in a position of authority and power over all.

    This galaxy mentioned is in the same universe as the Milky Way but that is where most of the similarity stops, with this galaxy being thought of as roughly 15 billion light years away.

    She was used as a "persuader" to help the King and his army to take-over all of the planets in the galaxy with little/no resistance due to the intimidation factor, but there is one planet left to take-over, one which was almost over-looked due to it being a smaller, newer and less-developed planet in the galaxy. But in the King's arrogance, her expects them to surrender peacefully; which they don't, so brings Mapuche's newest challenge and one with most potential to destroy and slaughter.
     
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    His name is Tobi, his age is a mystery but he's very old as he's an immortal. He has unkempt black hair and is 183cm tall a deep wide scar across his face, is well built and has an air of nobility about him, and has silver eyes. He is easily angered and somewhat emotionally unstable and is very direct, he is currently working for the king having been enslaved by a binding spell. He is a member of an ancient order and desires nothing more than to be free again and will do anything to achieve that and kill the one who imprisoned him. At a young age he commited suicide because his wife tragically died, in death he was offered a means to revenge who he felt responsible for her death, he took it killing the person, in his rebirth he achieved a cursed immortality and wishes to finally meet someone who can kill him. He wears a long flowing black cloak with red flames at the sleeves and bottom, a representation of a solar eclipse at the front of his robes. He bears an impractical weapon, a giant beheader bigger than himself, it is made of gold, magic and a part of his soul and is able to cut through anything, the handle is about 50cm long. No-one other than him can wield the blade, it's made of gold it's too heavy. He is the shadow leader of the ancient order which are awaiting his return to carry out plans of world peace.

    Another main villain his name is Akarys, age 53 he has a short gray beard and a ponytail, has blue eyes and is 197cm tall, is slim built and stands with a slight hunch and has a gold walking stick his robes are made of silk and gold thread, he wears much jewelery has thin lips and a crooked nose, that has been broken. He was a young man with a perfect life, then his wife and daughter were raped and murdered by the kings soldiers. They were later punished but Akarys felt the king was responsible as it was his war that caused the soldiers to be there. He delved into the secrets of magic and especially binding to exact his revenge on the king, he learnt of a ancient artefact that could bring people back from the dead and decided on a different course. Using his magical powers and natural abilities of manipulation he became the kings advisor, the king is not under his spell as he uses the kingdoms resources to find the artefact that can bring back who he lost. He has no weapons he rather uses illusions and bindings among other forms of manipulation to achieve his feat and prefers to remain in the shadows than to take any real visible action.
     
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    Name: Shakaru
    appearance: Very pale. Always wears a long black jacket and a brown hat covering his face
    attitude: He is always smiling, probibly, although he hardly ever means it on the inside
    specialty: He is the most secret villian on Earth and he plans to rule or if not he can do that he'll destroy it because of the damage we're are doing to it
    age: no on can tell, some say he's about 18 and othersthink he's about 40
    hair colour if any:just white
    male/female: Male
    height: once someone sees him they hardly ever come out alive but the people who have seen him does no know and does not care.

    Shakaru is one of the most deadly unknown person in the world, very few know of him, he has never came out to the public. He is very pale, male,and weirdly enough he always wears a long black jacket and a hat covering his face. Not many witnesses have much details to share. People have said he was smurking all the time, but they don't actually completely know, the smile is probibly not what he feels in the inside, probibly because of when he was younger. His plans are to rule the worls, if not destroy it because he hates it because of the damage we're doing to it. He has white hair, probibly to match his skin colour. No on knows his height he has kept it secret to the people for what it feels like forever, witnesses have seen him but they do not know his height probibly because he has given so much torment to them.

    :):):):)
     
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    How fun!

    The villian in my story is a demon, and thus has no name, but intsead is Demon #12009. When he travels to the earth disguised as a human, he uses the alias Penn Breckenridge.
    Despite the Old English name, Penn inhabits a Native American boy's body, roughly around the age of 19 (despite the fact that the demon is immortal) for most of the story, and therefore has a medium complexion. Penn is generally regarded as a beautiful person (as a demon, his goal is to lure his prey; he must be physically appealing) by most humans. He has sharp, angular features both in his face and his thin, 6'1" frame, weighing in the 140 lbs range. Penn has dark brown hair and nearly black irises, and a two beauty marks on his chin and the nape of his neck.
    Penn comes off as a cheerful person (despite the evil soul inhabiting the body), however he keeps to himself and a limited number of accquaintances.

    One of the main themes in the story is finding an identity. Penn's current identity, as a demon sent from the depths, was something he had no choice in. Hell is a desolate place, even to demons, and he would much prefer to be nonexistant. Passive-agressively, he rebels by taking his time and delaying assignments, among other nuances.
    Penn's ordained goal is to corrupt a daughter of Eve. His subliminal goal, unbeknownst even to himself, is to break free of the cyclical nature of his life.

    Penn dresses like a typical young adult would, in a casual shirt and pair of jeans. He has no need to conceal weapons, because, with the otherwordly powers of Satan, he needs none -especially because he wants to corrupt his subject in the form of a friend.

    -D
     
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    Matthein (pronounced Mat - High + n) - Male - Height: 6'3 - Age: 38
    Hair Color: Dark Brown - Eye Color: Dark Hazel

    His Specialty is a life of forcing others into submission and protecting his kingdom that is entirely made of slaves. He keeps them cut off from the rest of the universe and is only keeping them alive to serve his demonic pleasure of torturing others and practicing his strength of them. Specifically, his power is the "Nerve Pinch" that gives him his authority he doesn't deserve. Matthein is able to cause pain directly to the brain by simply grabbing one's arm and squeezing, and it is strong enough to crush another's arm into dust or if he pleases, cause a person to go completely numb, like a lifeless shell.
    This is his weapon, and he has Gradiated - this is a word I use in my story that is used like the word compounded. Let's say that I have a 5 square foot block, and it increases the density, but changes the volume from 5 ft to 1 ft. Extensive use of such an ability causes the characteristics of an element to change, grow stronger if you will. An example is that if it takes a knife to cut a stick of butter in one second, how long will it take to cut a stick of butter that is like one thousand time stronger (or one thousand times its size, retaining the volume). It is pronounced Gray-Die-Ated - his body so that is harder to be destroyed, pierced, cut, bruised, etc.
    His great strength, which can destroy rock planets with a single punch, enhances his "Nerve Pinching".
    The most detailed techniques he puts forward with his "Nerve Pinching" would be his Life Drain attack, holding the enemy for a spell using the ability. On weak structures or normal humans this Life Drain reduces most things to dust. He also has a certain attack that rips apart his opponent and sends a shockwave of his "Nerve Pinch" to stop them from retaliating. Most enemies that usually can change form lose that ability and must stay in the form they were gripped in with the characteristics it has. The "Air Nerve Grasp" strikes the entire atmosphere decaying the air and tells him where an opponent moving too fast for him to see is (or using HV -Hyper Velocity, moving fast enough to not register at all to the naked eye, stretches all the way to lightspeed when it turns stable energy unstable and unstable energy stable). He can Gradiate a piece of a planet so it will not break off when he uses it as a handle to swing an entire planet upon his adversary. Matthein can easily cause an earthquake with his strength.

    His attitude merely is a call to make others suffer. He enjoys a challenge from an individual that stands up to him no matter who they are, and is quite jovial even when things do not go his way. Matthein seems to understand that the universe will eventually push him out of his place, so he lives life to his fullest, in making others barely able to stave off death.

    Matthein is a rather muscled man, but the peculiar thing about that is each part of his arm and leg muscles are rather compact and make his body appear elliptical while stand out at those points. His long nose curves down meeting his lips sloped into a small smile, and his cheeks appear boned and give him a sort of box-head shape. His eyebrows stretch thinly to his hairline at the sides of his face, and his ears look like they were sculpted from marble. His entire body gives him a big bulk and standpoint to others rather than him being excessively tall.

    The reason he became a criminal was to feel free of law, which could not be so strictly enforced in the universe. His life previously showed him never being showed right and wrong, as he was seen as a vicious untamable beast. He soon decided that he could do whatever he pleased, and did so, causing havoc across other person's lives. Matthein would learn about the powers that could easily put him down, and set out to train his strength so he could use his power to put up a stand if one would ever come. He finally came across a warrior who was able to make a form of darkness that was simply put an unstable creation.
    This meeting, allowed them to form an alliance to disrupt the universe and put other's down for their own strength by their strength. Matthein would view the affects of his companion's abilities while using his own to enslave those under the affects to make them suffer all he wished and was living like a king. One that didn't care if his people died or not, and didn't worry much about being overthrown. After a while, his friend in evil had not affects to share, so Matthein would come back after using what he learned about his "Nerve Pinch" and destroy superheroes and other valued figures to see what extent he had to his powers.
    He found a forbidden group, The Big Bang Brothers, and met with the one Cheibeil, who had recently moved a planet to defeat his enemy. Matthein lifted his left hand onto Cheibeil's shoulder, and ripped the arm right off, causing dementia to the guardian of the universe. But he found himself stunned after the shapeshifter, regrew the arm, yet still felt agony enough to lower himself to the ground and weap silently. Cheibeil later vowed to defeat Matthein, when he found out where he was. He did return with his brethren, and Matthein to his comrade. During living in one galaxy that his comrade infected with the unstable element that caused time to slow, the one he had torn the arm off came to face him.
    The Warrior had taken on serious training, desperate to overcome the man who violated him. Even moreso, after Cheibeil learned what kind of man, Matthein really was to his people, taking the title of king and being so cruel. They faced off, Matthein giving Cheibeil a sporting chance, having the advantage was usually his disposition. He did not expect the Shapeshifter to use so much power that he would almost die, but still he was not in the same league as the 'king'. Eventually, the fight was closing, Matthein thought it best to face the hero seriously, but was caught in an attack so powerful he was sent flying into the nearest star. He could have easily stopped it, but he had lost, and he did not want his honor to be in any stake.
    After his defeat, he met again with his comrade, their next major target, would be The Big Bang Brothers...
     
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    Ralph Tchernativ: at age 51, 5'6 with black hair and sharp grey eyes, ralph is the perfect average guy, lives in a Canada, but has a strictly russian backround, and consequently a thick accent. His backround is undocumented, but rumours circulate that he was a subject for a soviet telepathy experiment until his escape which mentally derranged him. He used to be one of the top political scientists in the country, until he got fired for fraud. But upon leaving, he planted thousands of contingencies in the political infasctructure which can destabalise the entire economy and political order. He calls upon whenever he needs a 'favour'. These 'favours' usually include inmates from max security prisons which he brings to his house and eats them. The others he practices occult sciences on them. He hopes one day to resurect a living being from the dead and create a cabal of telepaths which can destryoy the country that robbed him of his sanity.
     
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    Richard Balkan grew up in a small town called Darllyville, in Southern Arizona. Brought up by a Clergyman Father and a Nurse mother, he was expected to blossom into a pure and sweet child. But that never happened. At the age of nine Darllyville's major bank was attacked by a gang of cut throat professionals. Richard was taken as hostage and even after their escape the gang's leader didn't give him his freedom. Richard was tortured both mentally and physically. The gang leader took a fancy to him and decided to raise him as his own. He was trained to fight, to steal and most importantly to kill. His pure ideals were torn from him and replaced by blood lust. Now he kills simply for the joy of killing. The law enforcement of seven countries are looking or him, yet no one knows where he lives. Kills once a day just for the sake of it, but also takes contact assignments as a professional assassin. Now he is known as the Dark Sniper. No one knows how he looks anymore or his real age. But everyone ears the Dark Sniper and prays to God he rots to Death.
     
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    I think I'll participate. This is the main villain in the first book in my first series, though not the main villain in the series.

    Name: Michael
    Age: 25
    Physical description: Tall, broad in the shoulder, slightly muscular, blond hair that hangs down to his back, sea-green eyes.

    At the age of ten, his youngest brother was born. Within a month, a prophet declared that the oldest of the three sons to the king of Ifriel would kill the middle, and that the youngest son would kill the oldest. To prevent such horror, the youngest son is sent to the borders of the kingdom, to live out his days in poverty. The middle son is kept, as rightful heir to the throne of Ifriel. The kingdom itself is split in two, the recently annexed kingdom of Birean is returned to its former status, and Michael is sent to rule the neighboring land.

    Torn from his parents, his brothers lost, he is left alone in the foreign land, with only confusion and fear for company. But in the midst of his darkest thoughts, his mind protects itself.

    Michael's psyche splits, and he becomes three people: Michael remains a scared and confused boy, but he is no longer alone, and he is far from helpless. His second self is a man who has taken to calling himself Forlornity, a person that delights in the suffering of others and finds the lack of subtlety in the world to be proof that he is a superior being. And Lariche(not a set name), a man who desires nothing more than peace, who needs to be respected, and looks forward to the day that he will find love.

    As Michael gains ground in his lands, as his power becomes harder and harder to resist, he sets his sights on the Kingdom that ousted him, and prepares to release his fury on the family that rejected him. And when the king's madness spreads like a plague, what force can deny the growing darkness, and turn the tide of war?
     
  20. Ziku

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    Well, I didn't make him on the spot or anything.... I just feel like showing him off right now.

    Name- Cyrus (No existing surname)
    Apearance- That of a young man, late teens to early twenties (though anywhere from twenty to thirty years older then he apears, as he never ages). Fairly muscular, though not overwhelmingly so.
    Aditude- Conceited, though carful and manipulative when need be. Has an incredable and uncontrolable lust for power and lives for the sight of death.
    Specialty- Manipulating souls and spirit energy via the gem on his neck. With it, he can do anything from create fields to disrupt natural energies to stealing souls for sustinence.
    Age- Varying in the series from around thirty to fifty years old, though never apears to age past seventeen.
    Hair Color- Crimson red and spiked
    Height- Aproximently 6 foot 7
    Desc.- As a young child, Cyrus stole the gem he now wears around his neck, reviving the evil powers sealed within it. Although early on the darkness within the gem manipulated him, as he became more power he inevitably became more powerful then the evils within, and defeated them, proving himself as the darker being. The lust for power he obtained from stealing the gem now leads him to seek out the other two, owned by his brother and sister.
    Bio.- In the world of Lanera (similar to Midevail earth) Cyrus was born to be one of earth's rulers, one day doing so with the power of the gem he would inherit, and rule alongside his brother Ziku and his sister Sarah. Despite those intentions, when Cyrus stole his gem and unleashed it's sealed evils, he began his planning to steal the other two gems from his siblings. With the evils of the gems now part of him, Cyrus now uses souls he steals as sustinence.
    Goals- Take the gems from his siblings and weild powers rivaling the powers of a god, afterwards turning earth into a world where all of humanity suffers as he sees fit.
    Clothing and Weapons- Usually wears a sleveless blue shirt (though fancier when need be) that shows diagonal rows of black tatoos all down his arms. He usually wears black pants and boots as well, and never removes the gem around his neck, and constantly wears a black fingerless glove on his right hand with skin colored cloth at the ends of each finger, hidding the severe burning under it. His weapons of choice includes a large duel- sidded sword with teeth on one side, apearing to be made of gold, along with a katana that apears simple, but deadly. When need be, he can also summon forth a sword composed of the souls within his gem.
    Characteristics- Usually predudiced towards anyone weaker then himself, though holds a gruding respect for anyone who can survive a confrontation with him. He has no emotions towards anyone, no matter who they are, even his close family. He claims to lack consciousness, though it is not offical.
     
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    Jessica Burroughs, 32. She has Blond hair and stands 5'6."

    She is the daughter of shipping tycoon Edward and his wife Elizabeth. She met James in kindergarten and became best of friends and eventually became boyfriend and girl friend. They married at eighteen.

    All their lives they had talked about having children. At twenty that dream seemed to come true when she became pregnant with quadruplets. Tragedy followed when she and James are in a horrific car accident. Waking from three weeks in a coma, she found James was dead and she had lost the babies.

    Years have passed, but the desire to have children as she and James had wanted haunts her dreams. She is unable to bear children, and years under the care of a psychiatrist and an attempted suicide after the accident makes it impossible to adopt. She begins considering stealing children.

    The Burroughs Foundation is formed and allows parents to registers their kids pictures, fingerprints, and other key information in a data base that can be called on if the child should disappear. It also allows Jessica to secretly search for the perfect children she and James had always wanted.

    Then the twelve year old heroes of Phoenix Force appear. The same age her babies would have been, she initially sees them as a threat to her plans. Discovering the light-based source of their powers, her view changes and the boy and three girls go from being a danger to her plans to "trophies" she can love, cherish, and brainwash to accept her as their new mother.
     
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    Really fun idea for a thread, I thought I'd give it a go!
    *****

    Holly Sty, born in London and aged 23. She's 5'5, slim with a round attractive face and the tiniest hands. Her hair is red, slightly waved and drapes down her back, touching her waist and curling at the ends. She has green eyes and tiny brown freckles across her nose and her cheeks. Her make-up is caked on, thick red lipstick on her lips and mascara clumping her eyelashes together, similar in appearance to spider legs.
    Her foul mouth and bad language seem out of place coming from someone with such a youthful innocent looking face, she's streetwise and can look after herself in whatever situation she gets herself into.

    She watched her mother being killed by the hands of her alcoholic father when she was fourteen years old. After a long 5 years of domestic abuse, he finally finished her off with one of the sharp knives in the set he bought her for Christmas the year before, the same Christmas he put her in hospital because she burned the turkey.
    To avoid being taken in to care, Holly moved in with her prostitute aunt in an estate in East London. Her aunt was kind to her, but she soon got sucked into the sex trade and by eighteen she was already familiar with the customers.

    Unlike the other prostitutes she spends the cold nights hanging around the streets with, she isn't in it for drug money. She isn't even bothered by the money, she collects it and keeps it stored away only using what she needs.
    Her main thrill is to prey on the men who pick her up, her looks make her one of the most wanted prostitutes of the area and she is very convincing at playing the young innocent girl who got mixed up with the wrong people. Until she gets her client home, that is.

    Her weapon of choice is a large kitchen knife, one from the set her father bought her mother many Christmas's ago. She prefers the men who enjoy BDSM, or even just being handcuffed and gagged. It gives her the chance to work at her own pace, she could torture them all night before having to kill them. Though, a stab in the back after asking him to get his money out usually knocks him to the floor quick enough without any noise.
     
  23. MarchOfMephisto

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    Lord Fenedor Contemno hasn't always been evil. He used to be a happy, wise ruler with a wife and child. Until the day his wife went missing..after a few agonising weeks, his wife's body was found. Contemno was distraught at the death of his one true love, especially after he realised the necklace that he gave her on their wedding day was missing. As she had stormed out of the house after an explosive argument with him, Contemno wasn't sure whether it ahd been stolen or if she had thrown it away. Guilt and heartbreak overwhelmed him and he sank into psychosis. The land he ruled in became fearful of him and his obsession with murdering. Because he doesn't know who did this to his wife, he thinks that if he kills anyone who angers him he will eventually get the right person, and that his wife will miraculously come back to life. He has long black hair down to the bottom of his back, dark gray eyes and unusally white teeth. He is 38 years old, and wears a long black coat. He carries a long stick with a silver dragons head on the end, on his belt which he uses to intimidate people. His weapons vary, but he captures his victims and locks them in cages which he hoists up into the air, he made these himself with his mechanical talent. The cages have bars which burn whoever touches them, this stops people from escaping.
     
  24. Winterman

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    He is tall and thin, probably from his seemingly endless drive and energy. Sin City is his favorite place to be, it was made for him. Today, he is looking for some new action, he has goals to meet you know. No rest for the wicked as they say. The action is easy to find here. He can see it on their faces—ready to fall right into drugs, sex, or gambling. Pure, unadulterated, gluttony; and here he is to pick up the pieces. Here is one now, he can tell by the way she his holding back the tears and he is clinching his teeth with frustration and anger. She likely never trusts him so she probably never let him out her sight so it probably has to do with gambling rather than another woman. They are ripe for the plucking. Maybe he’ll get two this time. It is always great with they come in pairs or groups. He starts to walk over to them. Unfortunately his cell phone rings and he checks the number; he has to take this call regardless of this ripe target. He speaks with reluctance, “Hello, Satan. What do you need, Sir?”
     
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    Name:The Red Terrorist
    Age: Unknown
    Gender:Male
    Height: 6'3"
    Hair and Eye Color:No hair Eyeballs are yellow retinas are brown
    Attire:A blood red kilt around his waist
    Other physical traits:Of muscular build and looks like a human with his body turned inside out. Fleshy skin
    Attitude:Calm in most cases, but has no tolerance for those who screw up
    Specialty:Intimidating others

    Bio:Not much is known about The Red Terrorist. He was given this name when he arrived at The Manardins' Day Festival to assassinate the nation's king and queen. If this was his ultimate goal, it is quite not clear. He uses no weapons other than his hands. He was rumored to be last seen lurking in the mountains of a foreign northern country.
     

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