Okay, in my story Angels of Aurora, I've been having a few problems with dialogue. I've gotten a lot of different responses, such as it doesn't seem like they would say that, or that it wasn't helping the story along a lot, or that it did absolutely nothing for the character development. So, I guess my question is how do I have dialogue that would help a character develop more? When I write the dialogue usually, I use phrases or statements I would use, or have used in real life. So, I guess I don't quiet understand how it would hinder my development if I really do use them in real life, unless my development is off too. It's slightly confusing. Any thoughts, or suggestions on how I can make my question a little bit more clear?