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    Create a poem, each person adds 1 line!

    Discussion in 'Writing Prompts' started by aboyd, Jul 6, 2006.

    The hardest part will be deciding when it is done! :)

    I'll contribute the first line. Here we go:

    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake
     
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    Question: is this rhyming or freestyle?
     
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    You and the next 2 people will determine that, by what you post. :) You could turn it into a formal poem with a rhyme scheme, or you could take it in a different direction. Set the standard, see what happens. :)

    -T
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
    As it did all my fears
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
    As it did all my fears
    The summation to all my beers
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
    As it did all my fears
    The summation to all my beers

    As I began to turn sober
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
    As it did all my fears
    The summation to all my beers

    As I began to turn sober
    I watched my family play red-rover
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
    As it did all my fears
    The summation to all my beers

    As I began to turn sober
    I watched my family play red-rover
    Then I had a huge hang-over
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
    As it did all my fears
    The summation to all my beers

    As I began to turn sober
    I watched my family play red-rover
    Then I had a huge hang-over

    I though they played like queers.
     
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    The sulfurous cloud was like a snake,
    a serpent from the depths of hell.
    The ground quivered in its wake,
    it trembled and then fell.

    Scary indeed was its sight
    but what was worse was its smell
    it's reek was of the bowels of hell.

    This is no joke: this is true:
    it smelled so bad i turned blue

    It was as cold as Ice
    this cloud that held my burning tears
    As it did all my fears
    The summation to all my beers

    As I began to turn sober
    I watched my family play red-rover
    Then I had a huge hang-over

    I thought they played like queers
    you should now you been doing it for years
     
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    Yeah I think this poem is done.

    Especially when Felony is trying to pick a bone with me here.
     
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    ....ahh c'mon just playin around Laimtoe.....you have to admit it was kinda funny. Sorry for any hurt feelings feel free to bash me.... I'll start another one.

    The sky is blue
     
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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue
     
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    Yet my days are dark
     
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    The sky is blue
    and shines with virtue

    Yet my days are dark
    Absent, of beauty and art
     

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