Hey everyone, First I would like to say that this looks like an amazing forum to get some wonderful ideas and chat to authors who share the same love of writing. Secondly, I need some major help on a story idea I've had since I was fifteen. At this moment in time, it's not written or planned as I would like it to be because I don't know how it's going to go and I'm unsure whether to turn it into a script. The plot itself is jumble of ideas which I've written down and I just need some to either say, "Girl...you're crazy. What makes you think that this would work!" or "Here's a few pointers, notes and ideas for you to take away with you and work out yourself since it's your idea after all!" Anyway, here's the idea (warning: some users may not agree with it): 1. It's a somewhat love story between a seventeen year old girl and a late 20's to early 30's man. 2. This guy is the Vice-President of her family's business which was founded in the 1800's and has become a world famous advertising business. 3. The guy had a serious affair with the girl's mother but the affair ended when they were nearly discovered and the mother didn't want her image to be ruined. 4. The girl and the guy first met when she was fourteen years old at the annual Christmas party at the parents home. He was having the affair at the time so that's not when their relationship started. 5. She fell in love with him at first sight almost and when she was sixteen, she kissed him at the office but he threw her out afterwards because he didn't want to know her. 6. During that point and when she's seventeen, they finally begin the relationship which isn't about love on his part. 7. The big secret (not sure whether I should mention it but here we go anyway): No one really knows who the heir to the business is when her father retires, she has two elder sisters that could take over but no one seems to know. However, people find out at some point that she was made the heiress when she was ten years old by her grandfather and her own father is just the front until she's ready to take over which is when she's twenty one. And that's all I have at the moment. I gave the warning since I know some people would be a bit grossed out and I know the law says that the age of consent is seventeen so I know all about that. Any help would be brilliant as I'm going insane over this story and I need to get it out of my system. Thank you, Anne-Marie.