Well, my dad just saw me typing a scene out that I hope to be the climax of a future Heridon Copper story. It went like this: Suspect: But I can't walk! Heridon Copper: And I can't <f-bomb>ing hear! Yet do you see me killing my friends just because they can do things I have to struggle with on a daily basis? I don't care if you're a blind, crippled kid with lukemia! You're still expected to not murder people because you're jealous of them! I turn around and my dad had this shocked expression on his face. Although he knows I'm not troubled or anything, I felt embarassed. :> So, fellow authors, share your stories of family and friends being shocked at your writing.