Fawnskin and the Machine Discussion

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  1. Nobeler Than Lettuce

    Nobeler Than Lettuce New Member

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    Jake collapsed. Let's just say he's currently knocked out, but not dead.

    Oh, but your question is smarter than I was. Yes. Of course the scream could be anything.

    Next character's going to be a female lesbian biker riding a 1948 panhead. Unless somebody wants to play her.
     
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    Gotcha. I'll have Matt's first post up later today, utilizing the scream ;)

    And that character sounds fairly badass. Her and Matt might have some talking to do about some personal topics.
     
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    I wouldn't prefer the latter.
     
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    Which part do you mean?

    EDIT: Finally introduced Matthew. I hate how it turned out, but it's the first post so my writing will get better as the story progresses, I'm sure. Right now what I've put up is lacking in detail though. Oh well.
     
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    Nobeler Than Lettuce New Member

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    Don't worry man. Right now I feel what I've posted is not up to par either, but I took a long hiatus from short story writing. We'll all bounce off one another.
     
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    Nobeler Than Lettuce New Member

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    Alright guys. Anna's in. Now, any of you can feel free to take control of the story. All the characters are in play. I encourage you all to write for other people and especially to use that UFO nut. He's interesting. If this were Shakespeare, he'd be "the fool". Use that.

    In fact, he just may be the one who knows the most about the gunman and everything else. But his twisted head can't form the right conclusion.
     
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    Did Jake get shot or just pass out?
     
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    Nobeler Than Lettuce New Member

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    I'll solve this!
     
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    Haha got it. That guy is a little nuts.
     
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    Ah, double post I guess. I will be posting soon, I keep running into a brick wall of writer's block whenever I sit down to add to the story. I think it'll get easier once the story is up and going though.
     
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    I hate to be pushy (and hypocritical) but isn't anyone going to post? This thing has potential!
     
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    Life is destroying me right now hah I'm trying to come up with something but I got a million things going on right now... Tonight maybe I will put a post together.
     

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