Hello Everyone, I have been working on this for awhile now and I want to know what you think about it regarding if it seems to have a logical enough flow to move forward with a story or if it seems to choppy and things need to be cleared up. I understand that you will not get the whole concept I have since it is just a quick outline but I hope you get the general idea and here it is: A boy must abandon his past life of family and friends to help defend a new land he knows nothing about from an unrelenting force known as the Pack. Allied with a group that call themselves the Guardians, this boy must learn all of their attributes to stand as an equal with their leader and hold back the ravaging Pack before his new home becomes overrun. However, as the boy begins to come into his own, a new enemy emerges from the Pack and creates a new vigor that may leave the Guardians at their knees. Let me know what you guys think and if you have any ideas on how I can make it better, or more detailed to the point where it is clear cut. Thanks in advance for all the help!