Hi there! I've never tried my hand at writing fantasy. Well, that's a lie, I sometimes write bottom of the barrel urban fantasy. But I really wanted to go for a high fantasy short story to start off! My problem is that it simply feels bland, 2D, overused even. My story would follow Mya, an assassin, and her brother who need to go to the Golden City (name in progress, guys) to kill a target. But the target had an unreasonably high bounty and when they arrive to kill the mark, not only do they encounter numerous trials, but they find out that the mark is somewhat of a reflection of Mya. A twisted, darker version. I typed up a rough idea for the first chapter on Wattpad, if anyone would like to see my writing style. But I was wondering if the idea was too vague or overused, and if it would actually be worth anything to a fantasy audience.